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by lojenn

person fraser
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww please post soon? me want more (sounds like cookie monster)
person Dezra
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I went from not liking Draco, to not understanding him. But I\'m sure it\'ll be explained eventually. I\'m glad you write so fast, means I don\'t have to sit and think what\'s going on in Draco\'s mind for too long . Keep writing, it\'s a great story.
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This may be my current fav on AFF.

I\'m still loving the story, and I am glad that Snape is out of the picture. I have problems with Snape and anyone together. I guess its cause I\'m more into the books then the movies. IDK?

person ura
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I got one idea where Draco\'s possessiveness could come from. Draco is generally very good at deciphering what Harry feels at the moment. May be Draco perceived that Harry physically wanted Snape more than Draco himself (Harry was very clear that he enjoyed his experience with Sev much better; no surprise here) and got upset and possessive over this fact. I would! Anyway, I cannot wait for your explanation. It looks like Draco learned at least this lesson: keep your sub closer to yourself or your sub can turn to another dom.
person Lioncourt
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok. First off, just reading the summary made me shiver. Can you imagine what the rest of the story did to me? And I think chapter twelwe was great in the sense that it wasn\'t at all what I expected. I really thought it would be \'good stuff\', and it obviously wasn\'t, and it opened my eyes so to speak. Also, the way Severus and Draco treated Harry after he was attacked was really heartwarming. Nice and fluffy, you know. And I mustn\'t forget; the PMS-period. It was hilarious!! I don\'t think I have laughed so much in my entire life (well maybe I have, by I cant recall at the moment). I have a confession to make. I like Severus, or Snape if you want, much better than Draco. I\'m sorry (I\'m one of those incureable Severus-fans, cant help it). But I think that my opinion is justified, considering how selfish Draco is. Problem is I sort of feel I should like Draco, since that obviously is who Harry is going to be stuck with. Right? I must say I was thrilled when I realised Sevvie was *finally* going to shag Harry. But the outcome wasn\'t pretty, was it? I feel sorry for poor Sevvie you know. He always goes around restraining himself. It\'s rather frustrating, but I do see his point, and that makes it even more so. Right now I dont have the slightest clue to what is going to happen. So I\'m very anxious for that update that I know is out there somewhere. Whatever it is, I can take it. Just bring it on!
Ps. I suspect you have already heard this, since you have several hundreds of reviews, but you have done a great job with this fic missy! It\'s beyond words!
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to say, i\'m not a fan of continued abusiveness towards any characters, but you\'ve written this well and you are consistent in your story. i\'m enjoying reading, even if i don\'t like what draco is doing. i can appreciate your interpretation of cannon personalities in a given setting. good work and all that jazz. i\'m looking forward to the rest of the story.
person Eowynselixure
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAH! I never thought Draco would be jelouse! That had never occured to me!!! Or is it that he\'s feeling bitter bout Snape and has decided to deny him forever in a fit of immature rebellion?

LUVD it as usual.

Eowyns elixure
person crazycat
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to compliment you on your promptness in updating your chapters regularly. While other authors do update as often as you do, you manage to keep the stories flowing and prevent them from sounding like listless rambling. I can\'t get enough of your stories, you are a very talented author. Keep up the good work! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter.:)
person Canis Lupus
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Me again, *^^*
Huh, what kind of problem did people have with Chapter 33? That surprises me, too... Well, anyway, thought I\'d just leave you a note again, I still like the story, and I\'ll stick Draco\'s learning process out, yes! *^^* In fact, I think you are quite right, and more in character than most of us other FF-writers... I admit it, I\'m one of those people who send them off into happy-fluffy-love-land in the second chapter... only they\'ll have some trouble from outside, or I wouldn\'t have a story to write about, *^^* But it really isn\'t realistic. So, I say, stick with it, do it your way, it\'s your story anyway...
And I really enjoyed the last couple of chapters, *^^* (Am a few behind, as always, but anyway, *^^*) I absolutely ADORE Hermione the way you write her! I damn near fell of my chair laughing at some points, *^^* Emotional Harry is just funny... *^^* I nearly pittied his Superos, *snicker* Well, Draco still deserved what he got, and I think, he really didn\'t know what he was getting himself into with THAT subicio, *^^* Though Snape is kind of selfish, isn\'t he? I mean, he\'s much more in control than Draco, and he\'s dominant to him, so he would be the only one able to protect him by claiming him for himself. But, well, I guess he\'s got too many issues with his own animal-ness...
Oh, I had this weird idea I wanted to ask you about... Are there female Superos? Or rather, Superos in a female body? And if there are... how ever do they get their Subs pregnant? Lacking certain equipment... Do their bodies change to accomodate for that like that of a \"male\" Sub? Or do they simply not exist? If they don\'t, than that\'s kind of unfair... Subs in male bodies, but no Superos in female? Well, enough of my strange theories,
keep on writing, have a good time doing it and may your muses be with you, *^^*
Bye, Lupus
person Elizabeth Spiegel
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!\\

PLEASE?????????????????????????????


I loved the chapter....but.....I..........just.......... need .................MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pretty please?