rate_review Reviews

hi, it\'s me, your anon reviewer. i just want to say, \"THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!\" this chapter was awesome. it\'s great to see harry actually *thinking*. i like seeing how harry is thinking in 3rd person. please don\'t change to 1st- it\'d bring down the overall tone and you did fine with this approach. ron is also growing a little, too, ne? i\'m looking forward to more!

Wonderful story, great techincal skill, a joy to read. I\'m finding this an interesting study of sub-culture and culture shock behavior. I liked Snape\'s reaction to bedding Harry. It reflects the kind of self-hatred that many experience when they find themselves with a characteristic the shoves them, unwillingly, into a not-quite-acceptable-by-the-norm subculture. I look forward to the continuation of your story. Thank you for sharing it.

I think Harry should have had a go at Ron for that remark! I also think Hermione\'s way to uppity and I think they both should learn that Harry can\'t help the fact that he wants sex all the time!

Anyway LOVED it as usual and I really love the way Harry was portreyed in this!

*Eowynselixure

Still liking it, and still waiting for more.

Each chapter is wonderful! Love the story!
I admire you fot taking the time to develop the relationship.
Take as much time as you need to write, we\'ll be waiting.

A friend pointed me in the direction of your story, knowing I have a hard time finding well-written D/s male/male(/male!) slash, and I have to say, this is the best fanfic along those lines I\'ve read since an excellent Spike/Xander series by a writer named Estepheia, a few years ago. I think you\'ve done an exceptionally good job maintaining JKR\'s style, characterizations and tone while writing about things that... um... do not happen in canon. Most slash along these lines just uses the characters and setting as an excuse not to come up with their own background, but you\'ve really done your homework and I\'m impressed with the amount of Hogwartsish stuff you\'ve kept in while also writing some really scary, beautiful and emotionally engaging smut. Kudos and do please keep writing! I\'m especially interested in how the Snape situation is going to resolve itself... it\'s quite a situation he\'s been put in.

One minor thing that\'s been irking me: when you are describing males by their hair color, it\'s \"blond\" not \"blonde,\" and \"brunet\" not \"brunette.\" The extra E on the end means it\'s a girl, which has confused me at some points wondering what a blonde was suddenly doing in Draco\'s bed, along with the blond and the brunet! ;-)

Awesome chapter, like always.
More soon?

Delighted once again! Don\'t get to check -every-day .. but it can be nice too, to have several to read at once!

Poor Snape.

Yes, give Harry a loophole. Draco still has to learn his lesson!

Hi! I\'ve just discovered your story! It\'s a tresure! Thank you!