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by lojenn

person LPhoenix
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you scratch that itch harry!!!! keep up the good work! i love this one!
person lilith
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a really good chapter plot-wise. It cleared up all my minor problems. So, Draco has an identity-crisis because Severus made him submit? Serves him right. :-) I liked your allegory of pregnant woman. I myself have no kids but some of my friends had that feeling too. Keep on writing!
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...finished another long day at school and am getting down to your story...sucks living in the east coast \'cause by the time I saw you update, it was already time for school :( I had to wait close to 12 hours until I could read 38. Anyways, it\'s a great chappie!!! BUT ME WANT LESS TALKY AND MORE ACTION-Y!!! LOL. No, its fine the way it is! Please keep it up and I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL YOU UPDATE!!
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
person Yana
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and i think Draco should grow up
person Laura
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person elecktra
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! I loved it. Your doing a great job! I soo can\'t wait to find out what happens next! So please update soon!!
person manx
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know why everyone has a problem with Harry/Snape. I think Snape would be much better for Harry , in this story anyway. He\'s more experienced and would be a better dominant than Draco is.
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait until chapter 38! I\'m a little worried about the werewolves in the Forbidden Forest. If they\'re mortal enemies..... is Harry safe? I mean Severus and Draco tried to \"protect\" him from Remus. So things are better between Harry and Draco!
person kkpixie
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laugh* *snort* Morning. What a strange way to wake up. I\'m off to my lit final. *grin**wiggles eyebrows*

Good chapter. Yay thoughts and future stuff and Plot. You are a terrible woman and I love you. *sends chocolate*
person dragonclaw21974
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore this fic. I have been reading it since you posted the first chapter, and not once has it even crossed my mind to stop reading it. * I\'m just a lazyass when it comes to reviewing*

I needed to review now though after reading another review that stated that your fic was unrealistic. I can\'t understand for the life of me why people read fanfiction if they want the characters to be exactly like they are in the movies or in books. If they want that then go watch the movie or read the book cause this is fanfiction. *DUH* It\'s not supposed to be realistic. It\'s supposed to be what the author envision\'s the characters to be like, and I think you have created a wonderful vision in this fic.

I can\'t wait to see what else you have in store for the boy\'s. I hope that keep going with this fic for alot more more chapters.

Damn, for me this is a long review. That just goes to show how good of an author you are, if you can inspire me to review. * grins*