rate_review Reviews

Two more quibbles.
1) \"nutters\" is NOT used in the way that you are using it. Nutters is the plural of nutter - you are a nutter/ you\'re all nutters. If you want to refer to one person as being mad the the phrase would be \"you\'re nuts\".
2) Stupefy is not an unforgivable, there is no sentence for using it. It is a perfectly acceptable and well used curse that carries no risk of incarceration.

Otherwise, still enjoying it.

hiya, me again. yea, i\'m reading your story againg for -counts in head for a few minutes- about the 7th time, more or less ^^ i like this story soooooooooooooo much! i think i\'m way too into it, but hey! i get way to into everything! i obsess a lot ^^ @_@ and now if u will excuse this obsessing teen, i will be returning to this absolutely LOVELY STORY of HARRY AND DRACO!!!!!!!!!!!!! -commence squeeeeeee of excitement!- @_@

I have read literally hundreds of fan fiction stories and I have never read a story as well written or as ugly as the one I am reading now. You have managed to take a beloved character and smooshed up his personality so thoroughly and unattractively that I have to stop reading on a regular basis just because I hate this story so. It is a tribute to your writing skills that I continue to go back to your story even though I hate the characters and don\'t believe in the premise one tiny bit. Consider this a back handed compliment and a sincere appreciation for your considerable talent.

Great story. I\'m happy that not only did Severus save Harry by slipping him the potion, but also allowed Harry to believe that it happened spontaneously. And Draco finally accepted and admitted that he loves Harry. Looking forward to reading the sequel.

This is, without a doubt, one of the best HP Mpregs I have ever read. I think it fits right into my top three (I am only a little bit of a fangirl). I really love how you blended in the \"pack\" mentality and also how you incorporated concious choices/instinct. I am also thrilled to see a fic where the author has taken deliberate care with their grammar, I wasn\'t smacked with one mistake during the entire reading. A+

Awesome story!! Totally! I am soooo going to jump into the sequal . . . er, after I clean . . . naw, gonna start it now! This story had a lot of depth and got me to thinking about the difference between humans and animals. Thank you for such a great story . . .

you probably already know this, but you are awesome. that was one of the most amazing, well-written, moving stories i have ever read. nearly three in the morning, and i should be asleep for school tomorrow, but i just couldn\'t stop. for some reason, reading this particular story meant a lot to me, and i thank you so much for this. God bless.

*smirks happily* That evil little bastard *shakes head* Gotta love him. He did the right thing. You know you had me scared for a whole minuet. between the loading time and he time it took me to read to where Harry woke up. You best hurry up and start that lovely sequel. Please e-mail me when you start posting in on AFF? thaks loved this with a passion and cant wait for the sequel. I knew-i just KNEW harry was Nesting..or as you put in Denning. I loved the whole thing SO much. It was so final and yet leaves you wanting more. I kind of wish I had read it will you were posting it but hey..better late than never right?..I am glad that i finally decided to read it and I wasnt dis appointed.

I loved this story so much!! Alot of the parts made me cry, but also made me want to hurt the characters!! I think that if J.K. Rowling could read this, she would be very honored!!

:sniffles: oh you had us scared at that last moment with harry. gods this has to be the worst and best hp fic ive ever read. it was so wonderfly crafted and i loved it. so sad and it held the best of what ive read. the ending, the beginning the body all of it was magnificent. please mail mw when the sequel comes up at cherryfreak014@yahoo.com please. i loved it it was brilliant.