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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Ko
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really great!
i\'m dying waiting for the chapters.
and i hope you haven\'t forgotten about meri!
i\'m glad theyre going back to hogwarts now. marlston was fun but i mentioned before that i liked it better when they were sneaking around looking for somewhere to be together.
ill be anxiously waiting!
person Ko
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey sorry just one more thing
is there any way you can delete the review saying \"THIS FICTION SUCKS\", because apart from being untrue, it is really annoying me because it makes the browser so long horizontally, and you have to keep scrolling accros...
person Kimi
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I want them to stay are marlston forever! guh, that\'s so sad that they have to go back to hogwarts. I absolutely love how you are making the three of them changed from marlston and all protective of it. And Hermione around dumbledore, that was good, I liked that. I am really anxious to see harry become more of a dark lord and to see what kind of reaction dumbledore has with it. Haha...the part with the fake draco/hermione/harry, and how even though lucius knew they were fake he just jumped right in there. Haha, that was hilarious. Great chapter, keep it up!
person VI
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS FF!!!
person KageMage15
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh nice, i cant wait to hear just how much they share with Dumbledore and what they keep to them selves, I hope everything stays ok though and no really bad things happen.
person Amy
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great, i love reading it i check every day to see if you\'ve wrote more! keep it up!!! Well done so far
person Kim
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice new chapter! I\'m glad Dumbledore took Hermione, Draco, and Harry away, i didn\'t like what Marlston was doing to them. Now, we see how it affects them when their gone....YEAH! Kepp \'em coming dearie! Your doing great!
Love,
Kim
person Riven
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter. it would have been better had you included a real sex scene between the trio but other than that it was great.
person lara
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome......I love the triad angle.
person Lilly
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving the story : )

Update please : )