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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found this fan fic 3 days ago. And have literally gotten on the computer as much as I could so that I could read this story. I have read all 40 chapters, and wow. You have amazed me, and kept me reading which in itself is a hard thing to do. I am looking forward to reading much more. And I hope you can email me or something as you add more chapters. This has been one of the best stories I have ever read. When Hermoine almost fell off that broom, you had me in suspense. You had me craving for more and more thruogh every word and chapter. And how Draco reacted when he saved Hermoine was just wonderful...
You have ever charater to the way they act and walk down to a \'T\' and you have amazed me deeply. Please keep it up. And I will keep reading.
Julianna Moon-Blood Nightingal
You have ever charater to the way they act and walk down to a \'T\' and you have amazed me deeply. Please keep it up. And I will keep reading.
Julianna Moon-Blood Nightingal
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story.... i check to see if you have updated it everyday.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, you had me fooled there in that breakfast scene lol. Something is up with Dumbledore, I do not know what, but something. And I wonder how everyone is going to react to them being back at school. Ooh, I love this story a whole lot and can not wait for more. Keep up the brillant work! b^^d
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi yah. Well I hate to admit it, but I\'ve been one of those annoying people that reads and then runs away without a comment. However I decided that it time to give you some feedback because you are the one writer that has managed to hold my attention for more than three chapters in quite some time. I love your story, it makes me laugh lots and while I\'m not sure it\'s the intended reaction, I appreciate it anyway. I like that you are developing the story and not just leaving it as a random raunchy number and I like the way that you are developing the characters. I have definately noticed an improvement in your writing and I think it\'s wonderful. Thank you for writing it, look forward to the next chapter, Danika.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can deff. tell the differences in them, but I want to know if they\'ll still have the infulences when they get back to their dorms. I want to know what Dumbledoor knows! I want to know everything. Ugh, so frustrating. But I love this story. Please continue! <3KC
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww no more naughty Marlston lol. I knew they would be leaving soon though and the story needs to move along like you said, but it was sooooo fun there. OMFG LOL Dumbledore walking in on that was just to damn funny HAHAHA I loved it, I was waiting for that to happen the entire time, I wonder what he would have done had Snape been involved in the erm morning feasting lol. That was a fun chapter, I can\'t wait to see what happens in the upcoming chapters when they are back at school, it should be very interesting to see how it goes with the other students, as far as our triads behavior and also the discussions they will be having with Dumbledore. I wonder if Hermione will be hesitant once they start talking about what they found, since she has the whole Marlston protective thing going on. Do you know how much longer this is going to be? I really don\'t want it to end lol. Keep up the wonderful writing as usual and update again soon. :)
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story really good dark harry is really cool put more dark harry in don\'t take kiitty out of the story
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am still loving this and find the plot fascinating. Plenty of sex too. I\'m glad Snape got to take Kitty to bed (that\'s a sex scene I would have enjoyed). The Merlin thing, the dark powers that become playful with guests and the whole triad idea are amazing and Hermione is the luckiest witch ever.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I am loving your story!!!! It seems like at every chapter you just keep on hooking me in, i absolutly love your fic, its become one of my fav\'s. Just thought i\'d let you know that . . . i was also wondering if you knew in how many more chapters it will take for you to finish this fic and if there is still a lot more to come. No rush thought take your time!
I am loving your story!!!! It seems like at every chapter you just keep on hooking me in, i absolutly love your fic, its become one of my fav\'s. Just thought i\'d let you know that . . . i was also wondering if you knew in how many more chapters it will take for you to finish this fic and if there is still a lot more to come. No rush thought take your time!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no more kitty oh how i love kitty but i absolutley love the idea of dumbladore not undestanding the triad not to mention the sex and the ritual as well as the power i can\'t wait to see what he ahs to say!! all i have to say is the change in the three of them will only give harry more power!! well great chapter!!