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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Amanda
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story! I really liked how you put the Harry/Draco loving in there. Sometimes it seems like it just about sex with them and its not. This chapter really proves this. Great job, will be wait faithfuly for the next chapter!
person luna
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaawwww draco and harry are sooo cute!! you\'re doing an amazing job. great slash with a story and excellent characters... we need more fics like yours!! keep up the good work
person lilycat
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was such a great chapter. i loved the Harry/Draco alone time- they are really hot together because neither of them is the submissive/feminine one in your story. It makes for a more interesting relationship between the two of them. I am worried about Hermione though! I can\'t wait to find out how this Merlin/Marlston/Dumbledore thing plays out. It\'s wonderful!
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have really been enjoying this story. Love all the facets of Harry and Draco and Hermoine\'s relationship, and their support, protectiveness and appreciation of each other. Here I am awake and unable to go back to sleep at 4 AM, and what a deligthful surprise to find another chapter up! (41) I had to write and tell you how much I love and could actually feel the love scene in this. Thanks. A
person firewall
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I think you were right to take that little side trip with the two boys. The trio is solid with their feelings between the boys and Hermione. They love and will protect her as she will them and it was important to show that they feel the same way towards each other. A very strong bond has grown that is not just sexual or linked to Hermione, they love one another. Besides it was hot to read. *grin*

But I\'m a little concerned about Hermione and the effect of sharing their secret. She didn\'t seem too well when we left her so I hope you update soon. I\'m also concerned about the Headmaster. Nicely written as usual. You do weave a wonderful story.
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle*
That was so sweet. Gah, I love Draco/Harry so much.

When are we going to see more of dark Harry? I\'m just like Draco, I just can\'t get enough of Harry using his powers!
person eddie
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter keep um comin
person Julili
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so romantic, it made me cry! So beatifull and hot at the same time. A job very well done!
person Miya Sparrow
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so cool!!!!!!! I liked it so much, it was so emtional! that was great that you put a little Harry Draco time! its nice to know Hermione isn\'t the only thing keeping Harry and Draco together it was a first! but now...Gods! *sigh*
person Aline
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, just lovely, I can\'t wait to read more of this, it gives me inspiration, and I love the way you had developed this story, its really great.