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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Catpower
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved Harry and Draco together like that - It makes sense that they would need to develop their relationship a bit more. Harry has been close to Hermione for years, after all. Great stuff.
person angel eyes
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was such a great last chapter. i love how sweet harry and draco are together and that they worked some things out and it was just perfect. thank you.
person Mrs Luna Potter
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh finaly they relise the love they share!! oh so sweet more so then anything else!! lol!! great and i think the three of them will take charege of the school hermione will earen the respect of the slythereins throught harry and draco as well as being who she is and all the other houses love her well at least as the know it all but i think will come to respect ehr alittle but most liklry fear and loth her well it is always a traid of i just want to see the three of them accepted not o mention a realky good public snog or something along tose lines whould be great well that is wat i want to see happen but either way is a great story and i love this chapter
person Danika
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo that was really good. I like when Harry and Draco slow things down. It makes their relationship a lot sexier. Nicely written!
person LCDrusilla
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When I read this I thought to myself, this is amazing. You\'re brilliant! I\'ve never read such writing that makes me feel like that. I\'m not exactly into the Harry/Draco coupling but this was done with a certain amount of taste that left sweetness in my mouth. Hermione was marvelous too, just the complexity she shows for wanting two men at once and not relenting either. AND keeping both of them thuroughly attached. There just aren\'t enough good things I can say. I usually try to give constructive criticism so my reviews aren\'t either bad-mouthing or just gushing-jealousy. My hat goes off to you PetalSoft.
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it!
person Mylo
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey ive been reviewing under a different name but anyway
Keep the chapters pumping out! I love it! goign to the page and seeing another chapter waiting to be read is like being kids at christmas!
That sentence didnt make much sense but i think you understand my gist.

I\'m still waiting for hermione\'s snakes to come into play! dont forget them!
person Nymphe
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I have not updated in a while. You have a great imagination and this chapter was sweet, but poor Hermione...the stress of a legacy. I cannot wait to see the interactions with all of Harry\'s supporters.
person lara
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love the triad dynamics, I love that Harry and Draco made love and that we are seeing how vulnrable the men are. I hate waiting for updates. This story is amazing. I love smut with a plot. Kudos to you. I am enjoing this more then the last HP book.
person Jessica
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo. Chapter 41 was great. The love scene...awesome job. Keep up with the great work.