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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person mya
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is so sweet to see boys having emotions too. Rather touching really. Poor hermione... exhausted and confused... oh to see where it all leads...
person Ryu
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was so sweet...
So when is everybody going to find out Miones a Marlston???????
person Julz
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey
I loved the new chapter keep up the good work!
I hope you update again . . . soon? Thanx!
person Michelle
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is like the best fanfic ever. it started all smutty, and then somehow it developed a plot, and now, for the most part, i\'m reading the story more for the plot than the smut! and that, my dear, is quite an accomplishment. it took me like 4 days to read this because i had to make myself go to bed so i wouldn\'t be so tired in the morning for work! and now i\'m going to have to wait for updates, which will kill me! so don\'t take too long. how many more chapters are you predicting? this is reaching truly JK Rowling-proportions.
Keep it up!!!!!
person Vixen
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, I freaking LOVE this story. The character portrayals, the plotline, the sex, everything is top notch. And though a regular story would have gotten boring after getting past the initial sex, you\'ve managed to keep bringing up new stuff that keeps the story entertaining and really hot.

Please update as soon as possible, I have this story in my faves and I read every chapter!
person peajay
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutley fantastic
I have spent a day immersed in your alternative HP universe
and a very good - satisfying day it has been for me
I\'m not a huge slash fan, but the mix between Harry, Hermionie and Draco give me enough het to keep me attentive
all I can say is, bravo, and more chapters please!!!
I can see Dumbledoor trying to free Merlin, but how would that fit with our heros?
I feel Neville has some more to give, you hinted at his sexual needs for Hermionie - finding her knickers on his bed. - but would he be accepted - i think not.
This tatoos sound promising - good idea.
person val
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh that was amazing! I have never wanted to read a fanfic as mush as i want to read this one! You are doing a great job! Please update soon! Pretty please with a cherry on top!
person Jill
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!! I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!
person Thia
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanx so much for putting in that Harry and Draco part. I really wanted that to happen. Ure a really good writer you know! neways, keep writing..
Thia
person Pam
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just finished reading your story, and I love it. Please post again soon. Thanks.