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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Dreamweaver
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I don\'t know who\'s reaction I want to focus on - Harry with Dumbledore or Draco with Pansy. I could so feel the anger building up in them. I half expected Hermione to be the same. I wonder why Dumbledore is so interested in Merlin and what it was that Pansy wanted to tell Draco. I guess we just have to wait and see. :)
person Mrs Luna Potter
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i relised a while ago this story would have to take a more serious look and you have done it well, they are not just teenagers and they know it! they are the three most powerful witch and wizard\'s apart from voldi and dumbladore so you can expect them to act it!! they do love each other but harry is a dark wizard and has a major power erge and draco was born into a dark family so he is very violent and powerful i know you haven\'t shown it before but they all must deal with the person they where born to be and make the traid work!! you have dont this very well and i like where you are going with this!! great chapter and i love the new darkness!!!
person Kimi
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GUH, I know it\'s kind of awful and cruel, but draco is HOT when he gets like that. haha, that\'s funny...but that\'s just the way I feel. Him being his true self is just sexy to me I guess. I am so interested in the way you are developing the plot between the triad and dumbledore and I am anxious to see more of it. I like how they sort of don\'t trust dumbledore anymore and I think they are better off on their own. That is what I think, mostly cause it is just the right thing for them to protect merlin and everything...and because it is so darn SEXY!!! WOO!! Anyways...great chapter and I eagerly await the next one.
person Lara
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you finally updated. I am so excited to see where this goes next. Continue on with the excellent writing and update ASAP!!!!!!
person Wanda
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love love love the dark sides of the three! And is that personal army thing really going to happen? That\'s so cool! I hope Harry uses his special forces inside the castle to kick some ass! I didn\'t review before, but I loved the Harry/Draco making love part. So hot!! More two-people chapters, maybe? Chao
person mister d
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, cant wait for the next chapter. nice embellishments
on the draco-harry relationship. Most fics just have hp/hg or hp/dm
but the threesome idea is awesome. loved the part where snape
was teased by kitty that was hilarious. in short, one of the best
fics ive read about hp out of portkey schnoogle and, well, aff.
Dumbledore seems a bit anxious now doesnt he? he needs kitty lol

~the 12 year olds are watching you~ now THATS really freaky scary
person Miya Sparrow
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that just proves that they never should have left Marlaston!!!!!!!!! heheh but its cool.
person fragonknight01
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it isn\'t too difficult to figure out what poor little witch Pansy needs right now---maybe a personal savior? And, Draco needs to be sent to Anger Management class once he is finished getting laid.
person sally
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is probably the best fan fic I have ever read. In fact, it is the only one that I have ever read all the way through. Not only does it have plenty of great sex scenes, but it is really well written and has an interesting plot. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person TaichiKoi
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have just one word for that chapter: Whoa.

Okay, I have a few more lol. Man, oh man that was good. I love the darkness of this and how Draco was acting, I can see why, considering who his father is and such. While I love Draco being such a mean-arse, I\'m kind of curious on what Pansy had to tell him. I can not wait for more, and it\'s okay that you\'re taking your time with this, no rush. Keep up the awesome work. b^^d