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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Alleycat
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH Shit! this is gonna be awsome! more lemons though, thats all I ask! Filch as a pimp.... *snorts and laughs* Thats a good one! lmao!
person Twinkle
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, great to see another excellent chapter up. I have to say, I\'ve missed the old Draco, even though I do like how he is with Harry and Hermione. The dark Harry is fabulous, I really enjoy reading his character when he\'s in Dark Lord mode. :) I look forward to your next updaye, as always. Twinkle xx
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey. love your story and everything, but i really dont like this new harry. he seems so different and it almost kind of ruins it, the way he\'s so short with dumbledore and he\'s all about control and being \'the dark lord\' now. he seems a bit mean to me, and i think it kind of affects the way the story is, the way it used to be. i liked it when he was nice harry! but anyway brilliant chapter, still wondering where hermione\'s tattoos come into play. cant wait for the next one!
person hi
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great!
person imari
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Petalsoft,
You know you inspired me to start writing, and today I was sick and I mean REALLY sick. But reading your story cheered me up and it accually to tell the truth help me get better! Wont say no more here bye!
-Remuslover(Author of Evan Devins and Harry potter.)
person mylo
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww
come on, some more hawt action please!
*still havent forgotten about hermione\'s snakes!

anyway, story is going great.. i still anxiously wait for chapters. ive been thinking about the real HP universe and now im often getting facts confused...
person mylo
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i always write a review and then forget to write something:

does hermione ever get her periods!?
if not, what a lucky witch

anyway, i shouldnt be complaining becuase this is such a fantastic fic, im still following whether there\'s continuity or not!
person tubbles14
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as always!!!!!!

MWAH!
Meggs
person sunny
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I just finished reading all 42 chapters in one sitting....and what can I say but WOW!!! This is so intense, so freakin hot....and it is intellectually intriguing...I mean I seriously cannot get enough...!!! The love/sex scenes are mindblowing and one of the main reasons I kept reading...but the plot, the significance of the triad, the Merlin aspect...the whole Marlston mystery...Harry as the dark lord....its just fantastic....I simply cannot wait for you to update....please please please do so soon!!!

Also just wanted to say...i have never before reading this story...been to fond of the \"menage trois\" especially guy on guy...(sorry by the way because I don\'t mean to offend anybody)...you know I was used to the simple straightforward stuff...but this story...my goodness....you through this story have opened my mind to this....I think its because you\'re a brilliant writer...it has to be...cuz I went and read a few of the other m/m/f fics...and its just not the same....you\'re doing a brilliant job...please continue for the love of all that is good!!!!
person kurtcouper
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I want to know where it\'s going! Oh. I want to know how Merlin can help and about Dubledore and wow, just evvverything! I can\'t wait until you update again! I love Harsh!Draco. And this is my favorite quote of all time: Hush up. Don