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I adored this chapter. Especially the \'Neville and his Grandmother\' scene in the begining. I don\'t mind not hearing about their sex, when it has great plot moments like this chapter had.

Don\'t apologize for the lack of sex! It\'s a great chapter. It made me remember why I love Fred and George- I really enjoyed the scene with them and Ron. It\'s almost enough to make you feel bad for Pansy and Millicent- almost. I thought the convo between Lucius and Sirius was extremely thought-provoking on many levels. Lucius made an interesting point about the Order using Harry and turning their backs on him (well I guess technically YOU made the point- well done).

I am impressed with how many layers you have worked into this- really enjoying it!

Don\'t apologize for the lack of sex! It\'s a great chapter. It made me remember why I love Fred and George- I really enjoyed the scene with them and Ron. It\'s almost enough to make you feel bad for Pansy and Millicent- almost. I thought the convo between Lucius and Sirius was extremely thought-provoking on many levels. Lucius made an interesting point about the Order using Harry and turning their backs on him (well I guess technically YOU made the point- well done).

I am impressed with how many layers you have worked into this- really enjoying it!

Man... a sex castle? *drools*
Okay, onto the chapter! I loved Neville, I\'m glad he made that decision! As for the parts with Ron n the twins I never saw them as swearing or like, being mean.... but it had to be said and Harry is lucky to have them on his side!

ive been reading this fic from the begining, and im still engrossed in it!!! keep up the good smut, and good plot! i like the neville scene too. a suggestion though... how about a little domination from hermione for once, there\'s been a lot of harry/draco domination over her, i think she\'d like to be in control next time ;)

I so...love this fic. Please post again soon. Thanks.

Wow, that chapter scared me a bit at first with Snape and Voldemort (that poor kitty!). Is this going to be like HBP where Snape is not really who he sais he is or is he just Dumbledore\'s spy? And since when was Ron skeptical about joining Harry? Anyway, I think that it was really good of you to leave the smut out for a chapter. I\'m getting very interested in this plot and I can\'t wait to see what happens next. When I started reading this fic, it was all about the sex but this story has really come a long way from a smutty fic. It is definitely something that will go down in HP fandom history. I loved this chapter and I can\'t wait for the next one! Please update soon!

Sorry, that last review was from me. I was so caught up in how good the story was that I forgot to add me name, lol!

well gd keep it goin!!! ive stayed wit readin dis story n i usually just start new 1\'s 1ce i get 2 bout da 10th chapta!!! it rele gd i wannna c summink wit harry n dumbldor bein m8z agen coz it dont sound lyk them ni dnt tink its summink da trio wud do n/o luv da story tho i check evryday 2 c if uve put in anuva chapta!!

The beginning of this chapter almost made me cry, Neville is so sweet and brave and wonderful!! I love him!!*sigh* That whole part with all the children at St. Mungo\'s just made me really sad. A very good job on your part I must say. Although i am sad you are straying away from the smut, i am also glad that you are working on developing the plot more, and I must say...this dark harry/draco duo you have here is very intriguing. I absolutely love how draco is sort of the punisher and he makes all those kinds of decisions. It\'s very hot. The pansy/millicent thing was excellently written and I can\'t wait to see more of their punishments. I\'m anxious for the DA meeting and what will become of ron...excellent chapter!! :)