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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person ice_queen_Selene
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im sawry but omg plz post up soon im dyin without my favorite story (imagine like starvation) soo plz pst up so i can read more i luv it n i wanna read a new chappie. . .itz been soooo long . . .anyway ur a great writer plz post up(think i said that enough)
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, i wanted to keep reading! you\'re going to continue where you left off next chapter right?
person vanessa
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t like that harry always fucks draco. why has draco turned into the submissive one, it just doesn\'t seem like something he would do all the time. maybe it would fit if that draco was once in a while, but thus far into the story he\'s really starting to suck literally. sorry if it sounds rude but i would love a draco that\'s just a little more dominate.
person TreVanSlytherin
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story,but if you keep leaving weeks between updates i lose my intrest very quickly.
person Narcissa Black
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My power was out for about 4 hours today, so I missed you. Great chapter. Poor Neville, he thinks he might be losing his mind. Marlston seems to have affected Harry more than the others, or is it that he\'s coming into his own as a Dark Lord? The power has to go somewhere.
person angel
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
harry you have guts ... poor neville he thinks he was going crazy .. man that was great i cant wait in till next time and in till then keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person lilycat
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Things are going to get serious next? I\'m worried! And uh, yeah! I liked the \"decoy\" scene. The idea of Harry dancing a little jig around Snape (not to mention the erm, other things he did) was hilarious! It\'s the kind of thing that I thought was pretty funny when I first read it, but then when the mental picture came into play as you developed it... very very funny. Well done.

Poor Harry- needs to get it out of his system? What I wouldn\'t give to be Hermione at the end of this chapter!

I have to say that I oscillate between Draco/Harry and Hermione/Draco as my OTP. I don\'t write Harry/Draco (yet) because I\'m worried I wouldn\'t do slash well. I\'ve never loved Harry/Hermione, though in cases of really well-written stories, I can buy it. I LOVE the way you\'ve written this because you pull off all three so well. It is impressive. I\'ve said it before and I\'ll say it again- Petalsoft is one evil genius.

That real life business is cumbersome isn\'t it? How presumptuous of it to interfere! Not to worry- your readers understand and patiently await your next update.
person Mylo
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on petalsoft, update please...
i\'m in the middle of exams right now, i need a boost :(
person justcrazyobsessed
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please, update!
person slytherin sugamama
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!. I have been up for nearly 24 hours as i couldnt stop reading this story. granted i was at work for 9 hours of the day, but the rest of it has been spent reading. please update soon if you can as i cant wait for the next chapter. plz keep up the good work.
suga