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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Master OF the Poke World
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want that decoy spell.Man just think of the posibilities (Thinks about kicking my bros butt and bunking class).Well good story
person kurtcouper
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU CAN\'T LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!!!! Ugh. That was awesome. Poor Nevvvvie. I hope he doesn\'t continue feeling cuhrazy. Please continue this! It\'s sooo good.
person Miya Sparrow
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm? it was interesting, but there was something off about it hmmm? don\'t know what though...anyway please keep writing!
person Riven
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story but it needs more sex. there should be at least 1 sex scene per chapter and at least 1 3 way scene every 3 chapters.
person papilionette
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had loads of fun with this chapter. I loved how you worked out the scene with this spell.
person Kota
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! loved this chapter! it wasn\'t your best, but it was still good! keep updating and soon!!!!
person Kimi
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha...that was the funniest chapter i have ever read. That would have been really crazy if snape had caught them, I can\'t even imagine the reaction he would have had. HA! And Neville saw them?! Oh, that was brilliant, really. I think you are developing the characters perfectly, like how hermione was mad about them doing that, although she did give in in the end which was good. Good chapter as always...can\'t wait for the next one and for the \"heavy\" plot developments!
person ice_queen_Selene
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!!!i rely enjoyed this chapter. . .I liked the humor and Hermione\'s reaction after was right on. I do hope that the personal matters clear up and that you are better soon. . .I luved this chapter and cant wait 4 the next on.
yur ultiamte fan lol
Selene
person UKK
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!
person me
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Harry has turned into a sex addict! Classic! I think it\'s hilarious. And Neville is finally maturing. What\'s up with Ron though? He\'d better join Harry man......