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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Allison
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I\'m glad to see there will be at least another 10 chapters! That was quite the twist bringing the Professor to the DA meeting and renaming it - although it does make more sense. I\'m glad he figured out that he has been horny since staying at the house - now Hermoine just needs to help him (and not just in the sexual sense either, although that is fun too).

Keep up the great work!
person Raven
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your story let me know went you put up more. but i didnot like that you took so long to use the tatoos but keep up with the sex magic!
person Kimi
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squee* That made me sooo excited for future chapters. The way dumbledore said \"Potter\'s Army\" wow, that was awesome! I can\'t wait to see how well the old da members interact with the new ones, that should be interesting to see. Oh and by the way...you did an amzing job with the first half of this chapter, and the whole rough sex thing. I think hermione\'s reaction was spot on. It is sad to hear you talking about the story coming to an end. *cries* I don\'t know what I will do when there are no more chapters...I think I may never read fanfiction again because this story was THAT good. You are a goddess. :)
person kurt couper
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, what a brilliant advanced. I love how AD is there. How cute. He\'s so adorable with his long beard. And I love Dark Harry, but I feel bad with Hermione\'s playing emotions. Ee. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person Temptressineden
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always, it\'s amazing. I\'ve been with this story since chapter 22 or something and I love when I check it and you\'ve updated. Thanks so much for making such a great story. I really like Harry\'s character in this and agree with you on him being better as a mutidimensional character.

Keep writing! I love it!

Temptress
person MICHELLE
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CAN YOU PLEASE WRITE A CHPATER, WHERE HERMIONE AND DRACO ARE ONLY TOGETHER. I MEAN, DRACO AND HARRY GET TIME TOGETHER. WHEN HERMIONE IS WITH DRACO, HARRY IS THERE. CAN YOU PLEASE WRITE AT LEAST ONE CHAPTER THAT INCLUDES HERMIONE AND DRACO TOGETHER, IF DRACO AND HARRY GET TIME TOGETHER, I THINK HERMIONE DESERVES HER TIME WITH DRACO TOO. I LOVE YOUR STORY VERY MUCH. PLEASE CONSIDERED WHAT I SAID PLEASE. I HAVE ONLY READ LITTLE OF HERMIONE AND DRACO TOGETHER. PLEASE.
person Sorceress Black
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well since I didnt review last chapter I just wanted to say that it was absolutely fucking hilarious, OMG I was cracking up, Nevilles reaction was too damn funny, and then having Snape fall OMG hilarious. Ok on to the next one, good chapter, nice bit of smut in there with our naughty boys, and Snape UGH what a prat, using the house elf to steal Hermiones key, I wonder if this is his or Dumbledores doing. Potter\'s Army eh? Sounds awesome I can\'t wait to see the rest of that meeting. Oh and I need to back up a little bit real quick, to where Lucius was talking to Sirius\' portrait, will you have Harry talk to Sirius at some point? I hope so I love Sirius and I think it would be great for Harry to be able to talk to his godfather. ok I think I will leave it at that, keep up the great work I can\'t wait to see what happens next!!!
person Dreamweaver
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My that was an \'active\' chapter. :) I\'m exhausted from just reading. LOL I wonder what Snape is up to and even more, what Dumbledore has in mind. Well done once again. :)
person TReVanSlytherin
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great petalsoft. your a very talented writer. I wish your stories could be films
person yomouda
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigod harry\'s horny! Somebody give him a tea cozy! Oh by the way, don\'t put Harry in that sort of position again, that\'s quite painful. UPDATE!!!!