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(Extremely horny squeal) WOOOWWIE!!!! LOVE Hermione wandering the \"downstairs room\" and then Draco activates his tattoo!!!!!!!! Dear GOD I can picture him lounging casually in the shadows, eyes intense and staring avidly at Hermione, whispering the spell under his breath... NO ORGY!! But a subtle sensual surrender of her to the pleasure she feels... I don\'t envy you writing that!!! Have fun!!!!! ^.-- I CAN picture a solo number though... Draco coming in to finish her off?

I just love where you\'re taking Dudley into this, making him more human (something that the actual books don\'t do... JK makes him out to be such a demon, no grey area). I actually felt a lil teary eyed for him. I wonder what\'ll happen after he finds out about his family, this could really bring them together as a family or screw them up badly (if Dudley freaks out and blames it all on Harry)

I have one question tho, the part where Sirius talks of where he went after falling through the veil. You mention that \"Unfortunately, there was no door to return back the way I came\" and how Sirius ceased to exist? Then you say he does exist but in a spirit world. None of it is very consistent, especially since if Sirius does exist on another plane or doesn\'t exist at all, or he cannot come back... how can this portrait communicate all this? These things that shouldn\'t be able to happen?

BTW I love how you\'ve managed to combine sex with plot in a way that there\'s a story with sex in it, not just a sex story.

OMG I can\'t believe you left us hanging like that :) Oh, please please please update soon!

i really liked it ... so what is harry going to do about dudley ...and will mione find draco.... please update soon and in till then keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

Harry and Dudley\'s reunion was (surprisingly) touching. I think it\'s very notable that you didn\'t choose the more obvious and over-simplified route of the viewpoint of \"Dursley\'s Just Desserts.\" Harry simply couldn\'t be that hardened or callous, and I think that your take on the situation was very true to his character.

And of course, there\'s the Hermione that we know and love- sticking up for Pansy and Millicent\'s right NOT to, erm, suck. Good girl. It was absolutely hilarious when when Pansy explains Millicent\'s preference and Hermione responds- \"Oh... Well, then. Continue.\" (or something like that) It made me giggle.

Can\'t wait to find out what happens in the room....

Dudley should stay were ever Harry stays. They should get over there past and learn to love one another

Awesome Work! Awesome Work! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think Dudley should live in an apartment in Hogemeade. I also think it would cool if Draco was devious enough to make Hermione get off infront of everyone.

Oh I have the perfect idea! Have Dudley stay where draco\'s mom is hiding! that way he can learn some serious respect for magic folok and maybe get to like them.

I think he should be sent to the burrow.