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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Know-it-all
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OO! what a cliff hanger! The next chapter should be preeety interesting ^.^
person Mylo
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NOOOOOOOOO YOURE SOOO MEAN WHAT A CLIFFY~~~~~~~

Oh Petalsoft! I\'ve been busy studying for my exams for the last couple of weeks and I neglected this fic.. I was so pleased to come on and see three new chappies! I\'m such a fan T_T

And I\'m really impressed at how you can always think of something new and imaginative (not to mention HAWT) for the lemon scenes. I read in an interview that JK hated the Quiddich scenes because she could never tihnk of how to make them intersting.. obviously this lemon business isn\'t boring, but I believe it would be the same principle.

Anyway.. Really good chappie, I\'m soooo looking foward to the Draco/Hermy action!! And I\'m such a huge fan of those tats, I know I\'ve been bugging you for ages to bring them into use! (Also one more thing I haven\'t forgotten is Lucius\' lover!!! I need to know!)

About Dudley.. Ohhh.. Hmmm... hmmmmmmmmmmmmm...Grimmauld place? That\'s a bit lame. Umm.. Leaky Cauldron..?OH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MARLSTON!!!!!!!!!!!!! KITTY!!!!!!!! Yeah its a little gross but give the boy some action! He deserves it after all he\'s lost. YES and its safe and perfect.. send him there! Yesssss... I\'m so excited. More lemon opportunities! I don\'t know who\'s going to look after him but since both Harry and Hermy have so much Moulah$$ stored up, they can hire some kind of dominant whore/babysitter/\"nanny\" to look after him.. Hotstuff!! Oh this is so cool. Lol.. And he must be a virgin! (I mean, come on..)

Ahhh I\'ll be eagerly waiting the next chapter!
person Michelle
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait to see hermoine and draco action. lol.
person spanky
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m glad harry and dudley were able to comfort each other... but i need to know what happens next!! i should only start reading stories when theya re finished otherwise i get too distressed waiting for the next chappie! lol anyway keep up the good work
person debbie
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am truly loving this story. its really great. keep up the good work.
person Master Of The Poke World
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story more than I love my belongings now (They include a discman,PS2,A p4 computer and a mobile phone) really good story update quick and also update that Sisters Of The Dark Moon Plz
person nessa
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. i love the way u write n i think the story is written as well as JKRowlings... its like, a branch off of it, using elements of her story and twisting it with your own vision of things. i think its awesome. can\'t wait to read more!!
person Master Of The Poke World
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Either of these sounds good
1.Leaky Couldron
2.Hogwarts
3.Burrow
4.In a Grave
person new fan
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a friend told me about your novel. i am really enjoying the first chapter. glad to know about the site.
person BlackPepperJack
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow just ..... WOW.