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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Darkfantasywriter
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock!!! *raises her hand high*
person Mylo
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you use what I suggested for dudders! Hahahaha

Oh man.. Dr/Hr is sooooo hot. THAT was so hot. The last couple of days I kept trying to get on to the story and it just wouldn\'t load properly! So my craving hadn\'t been fixed.. I was going insane. Anyway that was an incredible chapter, even though I read it in like 3 segments. I\'m pumped about the next one... obviously

Soryr I\'m really tired right now and my reviewing skills aren\'t top notch :S. It was hot. I suppose that says it all :)
person aCharmedOne
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey

I love your story. I really enjoy it. I look daylie for new chapters.

Dose Hermione find out about snape having her key? Maybe Dobby finds out from the houseelve and tells her?

Hope to read more soon

Bye aCharmedOne
person luna luck
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my hand is raised and waving frantically! Love the chapter...I have missed the three of them together tho. Hope you update soon!
person MademoiselleU
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, it was great. Hermione seems to be very horny :) You are pretty good writer!
person ForeverYoung
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, clearly that \'truelove\' person doesn\'t like MxM. Now, I know you are an author that likes to keep every reader happy, but erm, wouldn\'t having no more MxM sex kill the WHOLE H/Hr/D aspect of the story? May I just say that your slash scenes are some of THEE hottest on this site, and it would be a shame if you stopped writting them for one reader! Infact I request MORE from the boys.

Ha, sorry I got a bit p.o.ed reading that review, as for your actual fiction, it\'s coming along beautifully. You\'re so true to the characters, and I simply can\'t wait to read more of this story, and what does that Mr. Snape have planned exactly? Ooo, and Dark Harry, very very sexy. Lovly job.
person Master Of The Poke World
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I would like to be Harry rather than Hermione.And yeah the Laughing when thinking of plot happens to me too
person Alex
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What side is snape on? ME wants to KNO!!!
person canis major
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow beautiful as always... but i would like to stres this one bit.
i feel that the chapters are getting shorter... is it me or are you wrighting smaller chapters?

the dog star
person Jessica
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story as always. Really cool. Loved the basement part.