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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person SyNthSkiN
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is wicked!
I love every part of it!! and i mean EVERY part of it *evil little giggle*
So anyways, congrats on reaching 50!! and do continue writing!
It makes my day *cough* i mean >.> ...... <.< .... yyyeah >.<
keep it up!
person Tiffany
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'d also like to mention something that a fellow reviewer, Nymphe, brought to mind. The boys actually DID have sex facing each other in ch. 46, if I\'m not mistaken. But I totally agree with Nymphe, as I\'ve been thinking the same thing.It would be nice to see some lovely *face-to-face, intimacy*. Also, a nice Hay Ride (as I call it ), would be nice. Ah yes! I can see it now! For some reason, I just see Harry riding Draco as if he\'s had too much ***** from a street pharmacist. Not facing him, either. *winks* This story should have well over a million hits by now,in my not so humble opinion. Fellow fans,continue to spread the word about this incredible story! Please. Spread the word! Hmmmm. By the way, has anyone recommended this story to JK herself,as of yet? We all know that she reads fanfiction. Hell, send her a copy for the Holidays! Personally, I\'ve saved every chapter so far to disc. And when this story is completed, dear Petalsoft, I will proceed to make a copy and give it a home within my Safety Deposit Box. Oh yeah. No joke. *groans* Heaven help me! I just don\'t know who I am anymore! My family, friends and co-workers ........they don\'t know, either.*sighs* \' I can do this. About six more chapters to go, Tiff.\' (Epilogue, anyone? Don\'t cut us short, Petals. *L* Seriously....... It would be devastating! Gotta leave us with something. ) And finally.......in closing, It was very kind of another reviewer, Ananana, to compliment your betas. That is something that we reviewers don\'t seem to think about. I in turn, would like to thank them as well. I know that you truly do appreciate your betas. You make it known in each and every chapter.
person VI
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to make Dudley walk in on the trio haveing sex in a bondage situation
person Sorceress14
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I haven\'t reviewd in so long and there are so many things that I want to say! First of all, I\'m really sorry that I have not reviewed, school is getting rough again but now with Thanksgiving vacaction, I finally have time to read my favorite fiction in the entire world! Second of all i want to say that I could not be happier with this story. A few chapters back, i remember making a review that said you needed something new, somthing fresh, that threesome sex over and over got old but I want to appologize because the way you write is nothing but old! The new plot twists are fantastic! Third, I would like to say that that Harry/Draco scene was absolutely smokin\', Fourth, the idea for the Below Room was incredibly sexy and funny all at once (it\'s too bad Blaise couldn\'t have joined in!), fifth, it was so nice of you to have Pansy and Hermione make up, sixth, Millicent\'s excapades are incredibly disturbing (in a good way), seventh, I wana know what the hell Snape is up to sooooo bad, eigth, that kiss with Harry and Ron was brilliant (*and the Harry/Ron shippers jump for joy*), ninth, I can\'t wait to see how Dudley will do with Lucius and Narcissa, and finally (tenth), I would like to thank you soooooooooo much for taking time out to review BOTH of my stories and actually giving good reviews! If I was a reader, I would flame my stories immediately! Of course, I could never hope to be such a wonderful author as yourself! Just know that this is about the longest I\'ve ever stuck with except perhaps the Draco Trilogy by Cassie Claire (which is a fantastic read byt the way) and that I plan to stick with it \'til the end. Oh, it\'s so sad that this fic will be over soon, I won\'t be able to bare it! *cries* Well, sorry for this extremely long review but I couldn\'t contain myself! Think that about sums it up. Can\'t wait for your next update!!!!!
person mandabee
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I abso-fucking-lutely love your this story. I admit that at first I was a bit unsure about where this story was going, but now it\'s just WOW!! Just...WOW!!! You are an amazing author, and your betas are awesome too!!! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon!!!
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bahahaha! Ron kissed Harry! Bahaha! Ohh, I can\'t wait for Lucius around Dudders...
person Pink Midget
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!
person Catpower
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story\'s still going fabulously. Ron kissing Harry really made him look a prat - haha. You should be able to have some fun with Dud and the Malfoys. Great stuff. Keep writing please.
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my God.....HOTNESS!!!! HUZZAH FOR YOU MY DEAR WRITER!!
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh not likin\' the whole \"pureblood Hermione\" thing.... kinda kills one of the major issues that this new trio may have, but we\'ll see i guess.....