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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person KageMage15
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with the GoF thing. Ohh Rons going to get his ass kicked and Draco's going to be in so much trouble with Hermione and Harry for kicking Rons ass. LOL
person ItMuStBeLOVEloveLOVE
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! Draco has to kill Ron! Yay! Haha.

Actually, I think Harry and Hermione should stop him, but then we should see some more dark Harry after Blaise really does go for Draco. Man, this story is too much fun.

Oh, the McDondalds thing made me laugh too. You're an awesome writter!
person Parvati
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey i really liked your story and i was wondering when you would put up your next chapter if you are going to... thanx

Parvati Patel
person Audrey
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I felt the vibe, especially at the hug. What did you think of GOF? Personally I thought it was a bit choppy, like if you hadn't read the books you wouldn't understand alot of what was going on. They took out alot of stuff that should have been there, like the Twins and the joke shop? I mean that comes in in the next book too, and Rita being an animagus... I don't know I guess it wasn't that bad but I was disappointed. I suppose I need to see it again to be sure... I like dudley trying to escape I think that Harry should find him at a Mcdonalds grin. That would be sooo Dudley!! well I eagerly await your next update!!! grin

Audrey
person Dreamweaver
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving it as always. That Dudley seems to be more trouble then he's worth and goodness Draco's on jealousy overload. Excellent stuff!!
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, the movies are really playing out a Harry/Hermione relationship.
All the movie only fans are going to be rather suprised in movie six.
person angel
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ... please more ... keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person Bargle5
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Re your thoughts on the GOF movie: I posted a list of comments on the movie on another site.
Here's one that sorta applies to your thoughts.
Scene that had me going "I wonder how many takes they had to do on that one?"
Hermione rushes into the tent and hugs Harry.
Dan: Drat! Sorry, Emma, I messed it up again.
Emma: You know, after 23 takes, you'd think you'd get it right.
Dan: You'd think that, wouldn't you? (Grins knowingly)
person l'etje
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was very good keep going an post soon
bye bye
person Miya Sparrow
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes actaully it did! where was Ron!? but you also must remember Harry and Ron had that small fight in the beggining so.....I think Harry and Hermione spent more time together *shurgs* makes a little sense, hmmm?