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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Kasiie
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By any chance does Dumbledore have anything to do with the death of Vernon Dursley? For some reason I'm getting vibes that all is not what it seems
person luna
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
better and better!! never stop writing fanfic, you're too good at it
person Know-it-all
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with your comments about the GOF movie. IT was sooo obvious! Curse JK! So.. on to your new chapter. I found the plot with Narcissa and Dudley to be hillarious and I'm glad you added it into the story. Also, I can't wait to find out what Draco is going to do to Ron! The suspense is awful! Poor Ron.. Hopefully Malfoy won't get carried away, but I doubt it.
person Faeriewing
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story...I actually have to restrain myself from compulsively (sp?) checking this sight- I allow myself to look once a week :D Anyways, I am getting a ridiculous amount of enjoyment with the story between Dudley and the Malfoys...it is too cute! And I love seeing how Harry, Draco and Hermoine are trying to juggle their own struggles and still prepare for the upcoming war... Such angst, ahhh I am loving this...I really am.. And, just to mention in passing, I enjoy the smuttiness too, only as an afterthought, honestly ;) Great job; can't wait for more!
person Mylo
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Petalsoft,
Forgot to leave a review for the last chapter
I'm very excited about the end of this. Now that Dudley has escaped.. oh please send him to Marlston! Haha I'm still backing my idea!
person mouse
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i suck at reviews.... but i did want to answer a few questions about the GOF movie... yeah the tension between the two is high but unintenional... the hug... it's in the book... and the fact that harry sees her first is also in the book.... the four champions are waiting outside the hall to go in... ron and all the other students are already inside... that's why harry sees her first and ron is no where to be seen ;)
the tension is cause of those two actors interaction with each other... they just have that feel about them... ;)

but don't get your hopes up... JKR has shot a giant sized torpedo on the H/Hr ship...

person mr d
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ja i felt the harry/hermione thing going on a bit in GOF also. seems like Rowlings trying to keep the pairings
a mystery. Remember Ron and hermione holding hands that other movie? VERY confusing. Anyways
that was another great chapter in this fic.....man i love this fic so much!! Wirte until u get to chapter 120 or something!
Though i think i heard its only to 60 or so...pfff.....
person asha
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I can't wait until the next chapter. I just knew that Draco was going to flip out about Ron. He's so possesive! In my opinion, Draco and Harry have the more loving realationship in the trio. You should definitely have more scenes with the both. Don't get me wrong now! I still love the scenes with all three of them. In fact, I was slightly disappointed that you didn't use that many details after the Ron fight. But still, it was romantic and cute and I loved it. Make sure that you make the the little 'talk' between Draco and Ron REALLY good! Don't dissapoint me, lol! I love you and that wonderful imagination of yours!

Ciao Bella,

belle_morte
person JJ
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I remember listening to some of the characters from the Brady Bunch talking about growing up on the set. The two oldest had a "thing" going on and when they look back at their work as adults they can't believe how much of that came through in the series when they were supposed to be brother and sister. I'll have to check it out when the film comes to DVD, but now that you mention it, it did seem that Ron showed a lot less for Herm. than he should have. But the difference between their actual ages and their characters ages is getting bigger.

Thanks for telling us that Dumbledore ordered Harry to remove Snape's mark. Does he realise how much Snape hates him??? I have the feeling that Snape is going to betray them by giving the key to Voldy out of spite. I'm guessing that is going to be a high point in the action of your story as they fight the consequences of Snape's hate. I'm still impressed with your story. Thanks for sharing.
person Axelia_Rose
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I absolutly love your story. I was never really into slash fics, but I can make an exception for this. The triad...its hot!!! But poor Ron I hope all works out for him. The trio were such good friends. But your not the only one who felt the vibes in the movie. Though I am a hard-core HHR shipper, The movies give very strong HHR vibes. I saw GoF twice and when it was over I heard many people saying "Oh Harry and Hermione are so perfect/wonerful/made for each other, I just know that they'll end up together!" Apparently they never read the book, And I just didn't have the hart to tell them that it wont happen. Aparently I'm not the only delusional one. ;) But keep it up I just love your stories. Squeeee like a little school girl! :P