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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Debby Smith
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story on Sunday and could not stop until I had read all that was written. Is there anyway I can receive notices as to when you update? Please! This story is absolutely fantastic!
Debby
person Olwen Corby
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I got through 53 chapters to come up against such a delicious cliff hanger. I started reading this story for the smut, but I must tell you its your skills at character development that have kept me going. And do you know what i love most, you protagonists don't keep secretes. I hate when J.K. gives one of the gang a secret and they hold on to it just long enough for it to turn into a giant festering mess. Please keep it coming and don't worry about the plot heavy chapters.

Olwen
person Cara/Abragini
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Awesome chappie ONCE AGAIN!! I can't wait to see what Harry has in store for Drakie and Mione!!! Any more chapters coming up with Dumbledore and Snape and Lucious and Volders?! lol Can't wait for more!! -- Cara/Twinkie/Abragini



person Anon
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM

person Anon
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simply the best fan Harrypotter story ive ever read.
person Sorceress14
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I loved that chapter to bits, it was the best one for a while! I do feel extremely bad for Ron, but since Queen Petalsoft said not to because of later plot, I'll hold my tears. Anyway, I'm so angry that you didn't go farther with the Draco/Hermione scene, I REALLY want to see what Harry's punishment is! Dark sex magic, eh? Now, THAT sounds like my kinda story! And the whole Dudley thing was abso-fucking-lutely hilarious! I'm likin' the Dudley/Tonks thing. Give me a something squicky, I've been dieting on the stuff for a while! I'm also really happy you have a livejournal, I can come and bother you, lol! Well, please update soon, I can't wait to see what's in store for all of my favorite fanon characters in the whole wide world!!!! Write moooooooore! And Merry Christmas, I hope you get EVERYTHING you want, because you've given me everything I wanted!


~Toodles
person Jessica
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha. This chapter was great. "Professor" Draco was very amusing. Keep up the awesome work. ^_^
person Tiffany
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And how could I have forgotten this one?! Another favorite moment: In the underground caverns at Gringotts, when Harry uses an expletive as he complains
about how unbearably hot it is,and Mr. Edwards gives him a disapproving look,and Draco snickers. One of my favorites! Till this day I still burst out laughing
when I think about it. " F**k, it's hot in here!", says Harry. I love it! *The Marlston chapters are in a league of their own.* Reading their journey down to the vaults,and their trip to Marlston....I'm sitting back with popcorn & nachos, enjoying the show.
person t
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brilliant chapters!
i completely agree with you, i mean the way Harry was looking at Hermione it was the way he looks at Cho. That is a 'i have the most beautiful girlfriend' look or 'i really fancy her' look not the 'platontic' one that JK Rowling is always insisting. They soooooooooo belong together. Also i really like draco/hemione pairings.
To make it seem like ron fancies hermione they should of had him looking at her with the look that harry had on his face when she was walking down the stairs.
I think it would kind of confuse people if they didn't read the books or see the interviews because it seems better off if harry/hermione end up together.
Anyway can't wait for the next chapters!!
KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC WORK!!!
LOVE T!!!!!!!!!!!!
person t
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brilliant chapters!
i completely agree with you, i mean the way Harry was looking at Hermione it was the way he looks at Cho. That is a 'i have the most beautiful girlfriend' look or 'i really fancy her' look not the 'platontic' one that JK Rowling is always insisting. They soooooooooo belong together. Also i really like draco/hemione pairings.
To make it seem like ron fancies hermione they should of had him looking at her with the look that harry had on his face when she was walking down the stairs.
I think it would kind of confuse people if they didn't read the books or see the interviews because it seems better off if harry/hermione end up together.
Anyway can't wait for the next chapters!!
KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC WORK!!!
LOVE T!!!!!!!!!!!!