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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person spanky_mcwhackwhack
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL studley dudley... ROFL. -tear- why did snape do that to hermione? WHAT A BASTARD! i hope someone stops him... this is my #1 fave story, please update soon, before i die from being attacked by flying monkeys...
person K
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love, love, love, can't wait for more.
person AMANDArinorange
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow is all I can say about this story. I've been reading it all along, and just realized that I could review without being a registered member, so I thought I would do so to tell you how much I'm enjoying it. Of course I like the sex scenes, but I, even more, am very interested in the story line.
Keep writing, I feel it will get you far in life, because you are talented.
[:
Amanda
person K
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story is kinky, one of the kinkiest i've read and i love it, only on ch.33, but can't wait to read the rest.
person l'etje
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope snake doesn't suseed keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Shadow
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I check on thsi every day... its one of the best FF's ive read. I could Beta it also... if you need it.
i LOVE your writing and PLEASE DONT STOP!!
person Dreamweaver
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that despite herself Narcissa has taken Dudley under her wing. He needs a big attitude change before he can be studley Dudley but I can see Narcissa helping him out. As for Snape, wasn't quite sure what I was expecting there but ooohhh this won't be ending pretty. I loved his fantasy of changing the house elves for witches. LMAO.
person HPLover
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT! I've checked several times a day since my last post waiting for the new chapter and I am not dissapointed. I hope to see another chapter soon.

ShadowsQueen

PS I'm also liking the Sisters of the Dark Moon.
person angel
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
snape you are mad .. how could you do that to mione... do not free him he will kill all...please please please update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person rubberduck
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, that certainly is a major reveal. diabolical and cunning and very, very mad. that is so cool! there is cunning, and then there is snape. he's just so slimy. it should be very interesting to see what happens from here on out. i'm glad harry and dumbledore hashed things out. harry is supposed to be a good guy with dark powers, so it's good to see him being apologetic for his rude behaviour and feeling remorse for killing. i'm really interested to see what happens next.