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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a very skilled and talented writer. The story has enough mix of both plots the triad and the war to make it a interesting one. Cannot wait for the next installment. And trust me my kids got me hooked on this fan fic stuff. And your is actually one that i wished would not end.. Thanks
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! oh my god, oh my god...... how very adrenaline filled that chapter was. The most powerful line i read, i actually had to stop and stare at it to take it in. "Soon he would win or die." It just puts gravity on the situation, most fics will ghost over a battle with 'Harry won!' and you're giving him thought that yes, he actually might die. It being a very huge possibilty. It was just a very powerful line, good job on that! Ive got mixed emotions when i see your updates, i know the end is drawing near ... but every chapter you write it just gets better. And you really think it couldn't get any better .... here comes chapter 56 mind blowing with powerful lines and hidden secrets... im addicted to you and your damn stories.
I like how you mentioned there wouldn't be sex for awhile merely because they couldnt pause the battle to grab a quick one. That made me laugh ... though im sure it will all be made up after the war .... Im just really very curious as to how your battle will be played out. I have never read a fic where they've actually writen a battle... You wrote in chapter 55, that Hermione would remember what happened to her in Snape's room. How long is it going to take her to remember what happened? At least then they'd know about Snape's evil doing ways...
UGH! this story.... its just damn addicting!
I like how you mentioned there wouldn't be sex for awhile merely because they couldnt pause the battle to grab a quick one. That made me laugh ... though im sure it will all be made up after the war .... Im just really very curious as to how your battle will be played out. I have never read a fic where they've actually writen a battle... You wrote in chapter 55, that Hermione would remember what happened to her in Snape's room. How long is it going to take her to remember what happened? At least then they'd know about Snape's evil doing ways...
UGH! this story.... its just damn addicting!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AM IN LOVE WITH THE NEW CHAPTER!!! MUST HAVE ANOTHER SOON!!!!
ShadowLily
ShadowLily
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
but meri died in hbp...in childbirth...theres no way she could be living in marlston...even if snape isnt the absoluetly the same filthy turncoat in your story as h is in the book...but still how is she still alivein your story...o and i really love the story, just finished reading it for the third time front to now... i cant wait for the ending...and what about his horcruxes...are you even using any of the themes from hbp?
sorry im unorganized in thoughts....
sorry im unorganized in thoughts....
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!!! I love this story, it's what i've been WAITING for! lol, but aside from the flattery, I really hope you update soon. I check every day for my favourite stories, and yours is on the top of the list! Keep up the awesome work(wow, awesome is SO outdated but it's cool!)
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES!! LOL I have been checking daily hoping to see and update and today I was rewarded. Is Meri really Meriope? Man I hope Lucius is true to his word and going to be loyal to Harry because if he's not and finds out what Snape is up to then there will be alot of trouble. It's kind of refreshing to see Snape portrayed as the sneaky bastard he is in the books. Many fanfics portray him as tragically misunderstood man. BAH!! As much as I 'd like to believe that, I just can't make myself buy into that theory. Anyway.....Wonderful Chapter and I will go back to patiently waiting for updates on your stories and checking them 5-10 times a day looking for an update. LOL So maybe patiently wasn't the right word.... :D
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally some war action....Oh and by the way i was the one who guessed about Meri
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I'm glad Dudley finally got laid. And I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter! Squee!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG....I hate that bastard Snape. You did a good job of defining him. I love the story so far....even though cliffys are necessary most of the time...I hate them...update soon!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was really good! can't wait to see what happens in the final battle. ooh that dastardly snape if i was the author of this fic i would have him killed pronto! but i'm not, so i can't. oh well maybe i will write my own fanfiction... of this fanfiction... lol have you ever thought that if you printed out all the chapters of this fic it would make its own harry potter book!! sorry i'm just rambling i have nothing bad to say about this fic, only good things. so please post soon!!