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I LOVE your story, you absolutely MUST update more! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't kill main characters or their friends! It makes a story seem so weird when it's like, yeah, your brother's dead, but let's go have sex! Plus, who doesn't love Bill and Charlie, or Fred and George?? I demand to see more of this story that has me obsessed!

What a great chap. I can't believe you are going to leave everyoone hanging that way. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON. Great job, and I can not wait for more...... Dudley W/a whore. HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!

this was a very very good chapter and the drusly thing was fun
i also hoop that lucius can stop snape and help harry defaet lord voldemord one and for all.
keep going and post soon
bye bye

Holy crap! So much to contemplate in so little time! I can't believe that the final battle is already going to happen! It seems only yesterday that you began this fic and I hate for it to be over.....*sniffle*.... though with all that plot you speak of that's to come, I can't wait to see what happens! Though, it's nice you added some comic relief with Dudley, it's nice he finally got some, lol. I'm also glad to see that Harry gave everything to him, it was really nice even though Dudley is spoiled enough as it is....and as for Marlston as a battlefield, I love it! It's the perfect place! And you said that there would be some post-war sex, eh? Hopefully that means that Harry will be *winning* the war? Because I do NOT want to see Voldy and his Death eaters have sex....bleh! Plus I wan't the triad to survive and finally get some well-deserved peace! As for the thing about Meri....I have NO bloody idea what your talking about! It's really that obvious? *checks content again for a clue* nope, still nothing.... And Ron! I hope to God he doesn't die! It's bad enough he practically lost both od his best friends to his enemy and now he has to die *wails* but you said it's not that obvious so maybe I'm totally misreading it....well, I really can't wait to see what happens and I'm really looking forward to how Merlin plays a part in all of this, that should be interesting! I think i just about covered everything (EXTENSIVELY!) with all my meaningless rambles so I'll just tell you to update soon (but not *too* soon because I don't want it to end yet!) and happy writing, like always!

P.S.
A late Happy Birthday, hope you had fun! And sorry about the computer trouble.... hope it didn't discontinue the celebrations or anything....

hi petalsoft ive been overseas and am glad to be back and seeing 5 new chappes!!! im so excited (i havent read them yet, i just wanted to post this...)
meanwhile i just checked your livejournal page; hjappy birthday!
ok ill reveie again afterive read. i hope for some more marlston action!

Hey Petalsoft- Great chapter! You certainly have created a frenzied drama. I'm quite anxious now.

Harry and Lucius made me giggle in the scene where Harry walked in on Dudley. I'm quite fond of your Lucius. I hope that he has a big role in the upcoming stuff.

The chapter was very eerie feeling- perfect for the pre-battle atmosphere.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

wow...awsome ive been waiting sooo long for that hope you dont wait to long to post another chapter!! it was awsome awsome awsome......

EVIL CLIFFY!
keep updating...as always...

Most excellent chapter yet again, you are a legend, Petalsoft. :) ANd what a way to end, not knowing what Snape is going to do and I'm still not sure which side Lucius is on. I may be wrong about Meri, she can't be Tom Riddle's mother because she died giving birth to him - unles you've given us another twist in the tale, of course. :) Loving it.

Ohhh I love plot! but I'm looking forward to some post war smut!! Do you plan on killing off alot of characters? I mean obviously its war and people are going to die but like any major ones? Can't wait for more!

Audrey