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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i am obsessed i read this story all at once and now im waiting on edge for the next chapter i cant wait for the next chapter this is much more realistic than any other story on here ive read its amazing your a great writer which i know ive said before but its still true!!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, Dumbledore killed Voldemort's triad, didn't he?
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I swear I came reading this. =)
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What I think is that was such a tease!!!! It's time to start the battle: Both of them. I can't wait to see what's done to Snape. I'm glad you have a plan to save the rest of the villagers. And you're right. I'm dying to know who killed the Marlston's. I hope it wasn't Dumbledore. If so, Harry has put his two love's directly in harms way.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Quick update!
A little dissapointed with the lack of triad interaction in this one but as always, it was a very compelling read. So that battle is finally raging and people are dying. You really set the mood for the battle really well for this one. The smell of blood in the air really helped make it believable. I remember I once read a fic where the final battle consisted of Harry saying 'Avada Kedavra' and Voldy dying and then it was over. You really made this feel real. It's as if I'm reading the actual book which makes it all the more interesting.
So, I'm really glad that we finally found out who Meri was. I was thinking that it was a possibility it was Merope but I could have sworn that you had written Meri in before we even knew Merope but that was my mistake. I love the back story you did for her, it does seem very believable.
Something i thought was really funny in this chapter was the fact that the last one left us suspended with Snape in the room of snakes, wondering if he would make it past them and then this one started out with him saying something like "Snakes. Bah!" and then just walking past them all, I laughed out loud!
Well, it was really nice to get another look at Those Who Dwell Below but I did kind of change my perception of them. I used to be quite terrified of the fact that they could dispense of anyone Hermione did not like at any given time and change into anyone without you knowing it. I thought that perhaps they weren't capable of making mistakes like they did but that ust goes to show (like w/ Dumbly in book 6) that everyone makes mistakes.
I'm really looking forward to Snape's battle with the Black Knight. I'm hoping he gets hacked but I'm betting there's gonna be the standard race for time and just as Snape is about to set Merlin free, Draco and hermione come bounding in but who knows? Speaking of Merlin, I know that his reawakening will be the end of the world, but it would be really interesting to see how he would be. Maybe they could awaken him and then put him back to rest or something.... just a thought.
I also found it fascinating that Voldemort did not kill Morgana and Sebastian. Are they possibly still alive? And if so, where are they? Trapped aling with Merlin perhaps? Will that be a big plot device, Hermione has to make the descision whether she has to free Merlin in order to free her parents? Okay, that's just oblique and unlikely rambling but hey, it could happen. I hate it when you say something is obvious (like Meri's identitiy and who killed 'Mione's parents) because I can never get it and I feel stupid, lol.
Well, I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter and i can't wait to see what happens! Happy writing! :D
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Just wondering how many chapters are left. i know i say this in almost every review but i just don't want this fic to end :( *tear*
A little dissapointed with the lack of triad interaction in this one but as always, it was a very compelling read. So that battle is finally raging and people are dying. You really set the mood for the battle really well for this one. The smell of blood in the air really helped make it believable. I remember I once read a fic where the final battle consisted of Harry saying 'Avada Kedavra' and Voldy dying and then it was over. You really made this feel real. It's as if I'm reading the actual book which makes it all the more interesting.
So, I'm really glad that we finally found out who Meri was. I was thinking that it was a possibility it was Merope but I could have sworn that you had written Meri in before we even knew Merope but that was my mistake. I love the back story you did for her, it does seem very believable.
Something i thought was really funny in this chapter was the fact that the last one left us suspended with Snape in the room of snakes, wondering if he would make it past them and then this one started out with him saying something like "Snakes. Bah!" and then just walking past them all, I laughed out loud!
Well, it was really nice to get another look at Those Who Dwell Below but I did kind of change my perception of them. I used to be quite terrified of the fact that they could dispense of anyone Hermione did not like at any given time and change into anyone without you knowing it. I thought that perhaps they weren't capable of making mistakes like they did but that ust goes to show (like w/ Dumbly in book 6) that everyone makes mistakes.
I'm really looking forward to Snape's battle with the Black Knight. I'm hoping he gets hacked but I'm betting there's gonna be the standard race for time and just as Snape is about to set Merlin free, Draco and hermione come bounding in but who knows? Speaking of Merlin, I know that his reawakening will be the end of the world, but it would be really interesting to see how he would be. Maybe they could awaken him and then put him back to rest or something.... just a thought.
I also found it fascinating that Voldemort did not kill Morgana and Sebastian. Are they possibly still alive? And if so, where are they? Trapped aling with Merlin perhaps? Will that be a big plot device, Hermione has to make the descision whether she has to free Merlin in order to free her parents? Okay, that's just oblique and unlikely rambling but hey, it could happen. I hate it when you say something is obvious (like Meri's identitiy and who killed 'Mione's parents) because I can never get it and I feel stupid, lol.
Well, I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter and i can't wait to see what happens! Happy writing! :D
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Just wondering how many chapters are left. i know i say this in almost every review but i just don't want this fic to end :( *tear*
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been glued to this chair for the last 11 hours reading from chapter 1... And now I am left hanging...Aaarrggghh!!!
When will the next one be up?
When will the next one be up?
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better withevery chapter.I'm gonna cry when its finally finished because I look forward to the updates.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is both compelling and well written. It took me all night to read but I couldn't stop until I was finished. I had hoped to see Remus in it at least a little... but it is great how it is. I hope you will update soon.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great, amazing, sexy storie! the plot is really good... one does not see a well-thought plotline on this page!! update soon!! and then I will feed you more little reviews!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh no! the suspense!
This must be so hard for Dumbledore, to have been fooled like this.
I stayed up all night to finish your story, but it doesn't finish. I hope you update soon!
This must be so hard for Dumbledore, to have been fooled like this.
I stayed up all night to finish your story, but it doesn't finish. I hope you update soon!