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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

Hello, Petalsoft. Tiffany, here.
And so the journey has ended. It's been a long, a very long time, since I've reviewed, and I hope that all is well with you and yours. In truth, I read the final chapter at your LiveJournal a few days after you posted it, but there's been so much going on in my life and I was in a real funk those days; so much so, that I've been drained emotionally. And when you're drained emotionally - you lose your will to write - even if it's just a review. Well, now that I'm climbing from the depths of the deep, dark abyss, I'm sitting here at my computer, it's after 6 am on a Saturday morning, and I'm now at a loss for words. But not for the reasons you may think. I just don't know what to say, Petalsoft. Yet, what is truly in my heart is this...In the realm of Harry Potter, you've saved fan fiction. There isn't much more to say than that and here I am, choking up...
I feel like such a fool. It's just a story, after all.
But it's so much more than that.
And, oh, what a story! What a journey! What an author!
There's never been anything like it in HP fan fiction.

And there never will.

There are times, Petalsoft, that I truly believe that you're JK Rowling, herself. Pulling our chains. Playing us *all* for fools. This is what she would write if she dared. I throw my hands up in frustration now; I'm at a loss for words.
With the thousands of one-shots, the poorly writtens, the 1 chapter WIP's; Harry Potter Fan Fiction was, and still is, in my opinion, looking dismal these days. It's so easy to get that spark of inspiration, to type away.... for a chapter... or two... or ten.
Then what?
So many lose their inspiration, Petalsoft. So many. Even you. But you kept going.
It just got better and better.
And *THAT*, my friends, is the hallmark of a talented author. A rare author. One that's made fan fiction history.

I'll be visiting your LiveJournal to throw a few questions your way, as I LOVE posting there. And I actually WILL get around to posting more of that spoof of a summary - when I'm inspired. As well as a Snape essay...when I'm inspired. (you know how it is)

And thank you so much for, hopefully, the further adventures of the Triad and for the children being conceived in the circle of stones. You've said that you've thought of those things. Hopefully, both Harry *AND* Draco will be the sires.

You've made history and set the standard.
You've broken down walls - not barriers.

I salute you.



-Tiffany

That Was The Best Fic Ive Ever Read. Ever. I Grew Way Too Emotionally Attached To That Story. Id Like To Take You Up On Your Offer For Allowing Someone To Continue It. Unless Someone Already Did. I Wouldnt Ruin It But I Do Have Some Good Ideas That I Think You Might Like. My Email Address Is Your_name_124@yahoo.com. Its Not Capitalized. Let Me Know If Youre Interested. I Dont Think Ill Need A Beta. Im A Perfectionist With My Fics. Im Sorry The Fic Ended But Glad It Ended The Way It Did =). Please Consider My Offer. A Sequel Needs A Womans Touch I Think. Thanks For Writing A Fic So Amazing. And it was Your First Time Writing A Lemon? Well Thanks Again And Good Luck Writing More. (You Better! Talent Is Not For Wasting!)

i have to tell you what a genius you are. i read this fic and i was totally blown away. the way you projected everyone's feelings, the battles, the sex, wow... i loved the way you were able to continue after the first eight chapters even though you hadn't origially planned to. the way you tied in history with the merlin part and everything was so wonderful. you could be off of writing fanfics and your own author in no time. a highly successful author too. i read alot af books and fanfictions (because i dont have a life) and very rarely do i find one that's so perfectly enrapturing. i was lucky that i found your fic after it was finished, even though i feel bad that i couldn't have been there to support you while you were writing it. if i'd had to wait, i dont know how i would have survived. your fic is the best that i've ever read, i think, and i'm honored that i had a chance to read it. i really appreciate you toiling out this fic because it's so special that i feel that it was exactly what i needed to find. i was totally engrossed. i couldn't tear my eyes away and i read through the whole thing in one sitting. you really are a very talented and imaginative person. i'm doubly impressed because i have specific tastes and am a bit picky, but your story was absolutely perfect. i dont have one single complaint. thankyou for writing this beautiful work of art

Wow! I have been reqading your story for a few days now. I wish I could read it all so fast but I am in the middle of house renovations and stuff like that. But oh my god! You have this story written so well that i cannot leave my computer without thinking what is going to happen next. I love the story line thus far. Hermione being hidden away from her real family routes. Draco going against his father. Harry being a dark lord! There are so many part to this story that just keeps getting more and more interesting I love it soo much! You are an amazing written and you have a very great talen for keeping your readers wondering what the hell is happening next.. i have never commented a story before but I just got to the part where Neville was all like i have to fight.. What a tear jerking moment.. I am pregnant and a little on the sensative side but none the less! Wow!

I will review a few more times I think.. If not I will review at the very end!
Keep up the great work!
Megerella

Hi

I think i have commented at least once already but I will say it again - this story is superb.

I would caution against doing too much on post-Hogwarts sequels or anything like that. The characters are good and to take them out of the setting (and the age) JKR intended is a mistake imo. (I know there are hundreds of stories like that on this site Draco and Hermione married etc).

Glad to see you updating again, would love to see more in your other stories too.

OMG!!!! This story is so hot. It's like I am reading/watching a porn movie. I love this story. I really like reading H/D stories, but H/D/HR, just makes it hotter. It's just the parts with Snape and the house elf really disturbs me. But other than that, I enjoyed it.

This story was wonderful. It's become one of my favorite dracohermyharry fics. The whole story was absolutly unbeleivable and you should be vey proud of yourself for finishing this fic and for it to come together the way that it has. You're a great writer and I hope you keep on writing more fics for all of us to read. Again, congrats on the fic.

Much love to you,
Lexy

your slave girl chapter turned me on so much... i wish i was hermione... i have always wanted to be under that kind of spell

Okay so it's like...5:26 am and I've just read chapter's 1-13. I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner. *grins sheepishly* But I must say that this fic rocks and the whole harry/hermione/draco-shagging-in-front-of-the-dursley's thing was absolutly hilarious. (That and Harry wanting to take a shit on the passing car)