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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Dreamweaver
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Operation Make Draco Cum.\" OMG I love it. LOL Brilliant stuff once again. I think I could handle one of those slow strip teases too. Just need to find a volunteer. LMAO. I like the way you\'ve handled the relationship with his parents and Draco himself too. I\'ve always imagined it to be that way in the real books too although I\'ve heard that Narcissa will be quite the formidable opposite in book six. Oh well, such is life. Look forward to more very soon, I hope.
person JJ
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for a great read!! You have made the scenes so hot! Not only that, they are having so much fun. Just like me!
person Erika
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chappie! Keep going! (:
person anjelic
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your idea of having one on one\'s and threesomes. It gives every yummy aspect of this triangle. Very nice...my applause. I liked this chapter too.
person sheenie
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was fucking awesome!!!!!!!! I love you!!!!! More!!! More!!!! i need MORE!!!! so hott... *sigh* *goes off to take cold shower*
person dragon34
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think I\'ll look at another toilet the same way again. I can\'t waitto see what Draco has planned.
person smurf
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cheer*!!! YES! That was so hot! I loved it. Please update again soon
person Kris
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!...Keep going! Very hot!
person rubberduck
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whew. those crazy kids. those hot, horny, crazy kids. that was very nice. i really liked how lavender and parvati reacted to hermione\'s admission of... guilt hehe. but i wonder how they would have reacted to full disclosure. i think the school will be in an uproar when it gets out about those three. i can\'t wait to read more.
person Dreamweaver
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a talented little artist that Draco is. I so enjoyed his picture. LOL I\'m so pleased you decided to continue. This is simply fascinating. I\'m interested to see if Lavender and Pavarti do manage to keep Hermione\'s (well half of a secret). And I do feel sorry for Ron, too, but heartbreak is a part of life. And I love that you have a plot too, I\'m looking forward to seeing this develop as well.