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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person catpower
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can\'t believe they dared try the potion. And now they are going to Mrs Figg\'s. The poor woman (and poor cats). Are they going to have sex in front of her? Please update soon. I\'m loving this - it\'s both hilarious and unbelievably sexy.
person Jessica
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO. A cliffy?? Ohh nooo. Please update soon. It\'s such a good story. I am enjoying it very much and I like the twist you have there of Hermione being a pureblood. Ingenious really, I don\'t think I\'ve ever read anything like it. Please, update soon :D
person robin777
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was hilarious. I can\'t wait to find out more of Hermione\'s past.
person Miya Sparrow
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe thats great! watching the movies and reading the book will be weird but funny! I don\'t care that is a cliffy I just want the the next chap.
person Twinkle
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi I know I\'ve not reviewed since the first chapter. But I just loved it so much, that I couldn\'t leave it! I love the smut, you\'ve written it all very well. The Malfoy getting the Slytherins to kill off the students at Hogwarts is a great plot.

Just a couple of mistakes in the last chapter.It\'s Floo powder, not flew powder. And Mrs Figg lives in Wistercia Walk. But other then that, I think you\'ve done a fabulous job. Well done. I sincerely hope that you update soon.
person Hanna Delacour
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! I can\'t wait to see what happens next. I really like this storyline.. it is original and intriguing. Please update soon!
person Black_lust_z
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG no way did the just do that....*doubles over laughing* can\'t wait for the next chapter hahahahahaha. Thanks for a brilliant chapter!

Ciao *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*
person Meth
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, just wanted to review and tell you how much I\'m enjoying your story. Good job in keeping Draco in character, I was getting tired of reading about the fluffy Draco. Keep up the good work!
person Narcissa Black
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve said it before, I\'ll say it again: your Harry/Draco/Hermione is the best ever. Usually, only either Harry or Draco get to have sex with Hermione in these stories. Thank you for making it so sexy, funny, and well written. Gotta go back to RL now.
person Dreamweaver
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was some potion. LMAO Can\'t wait to see what trouble they\'ll be getting into. Interesting thoughts about Harry being just \'an instrument\' for Dumbledore too. Well done!!