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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person smurf
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes!! I LOVED your twist!! I ALSO loved your fucking scene...I always knew Draco would like it rough ;)
person Catpower
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. Fantastic. The sexiest story EVER. There\'s just something about your sex scenes that really hits the spot - maybe its the HG/HP/DM thing. The Dursley\'s chapter was utterly hilarious and totally erotic - poor Petunia. And Vernon would be sorry to know that he\'d been obliviated, cos I\'m sure he enjoyed it really. How hilarious that Dumbledore knows about their threesome and plans to exploit it - like he always does. Enjoyed the DA chapter also and spotted the deliberate spelling mistake: \"parcel tongue\". Nice one.
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man this story is so hot, I love it=) I think even Lucius would be jelious of his son. I wonder what will happen after they leave Hogwarts, they should just bond with one another. Wizarding worlds first threesome marriage.
person Narcissa Black
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your take on Dark Lords Through the Ages is so good, if JK doesn\'t use it in canon, I\'ll be terribly disappointed. Dominant Harry...so hot. This was a great chapter. Not PWP, by any stretch of the imagination.
person Twinkle
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A Brilliant much waited for chapter. I\'ve been checking every day for you to update. L(

I loved this change in Harry, and I can see him becoming this powerful, as he grows with his magical power. I can see Draco having difficulty on deciding where to pledge his allegance to. Well done. :D
person Dreamweaver
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. What a twist. It does have a rather Star Wars type feel about it but that works for me. I did enjoy your explanation of the Dark Lords and that there can \'only be one\' kind of thing - kind of like the Highlander which I also loved. Having Harry show a dominant side is great, I hope Hermione gets a good turn at being dominant too. Another great chapter. :)
person morgan le fay
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I am really enjoying this story. I love seeing Harry so powerful and your plot is turning out wonderfuly!! I cant wait to see what happens next, I hope this is a long fic.
person Brooke
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just came here to review and say how much i love your story. It\'s hot, lol. Im loving the draco/harry stuff. tehe, the visuals in my head are amazing when i read it. lol. I feel really bad for ron too, poor guy. Doesn\'t know how to please a woman. I think Ron should come back into the story, with another girlfriend and more \"experienced\" with her, I think Herminoe would become really jealous and try to win ron back realizing she might still have feelings for him?, that would be a totalyl different (but good) story plot. lol. ah well, Im sure im boring you, so im going go. I love your story! keep up the great work!
person smurf
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D:D that was an awesome chapter. I loved it so much, thanks for writing it. I like the relationship Draco and Harry have going now too. Can\'t wait for your next update!
person NeNe
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You capture the characters personalities so well, and then you mold them around your story changing bits of them, but keeping to their unique characteristics. Please keep writing it. I look foward to reading the next chapter!