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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person bob
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! yes you soooo know what your doing!
HOLY FUCK!!! I have black on my thumb!....oops! sorry, I\'m random and I just noticed that there was ink on me thumb......hehe
yeah...awesome fantasmic chapter...but I was all confused when you said Dumbledor was putting Harry into the life he did so he wouldn\'t turn evil...in case you didn\'t notice...harry grew up in the house from hell! he wasn\'t treated well at all!...or were you refering to the friends that he made?.....\'cause that would make a little more sence.......yeah
keep up the awesome writing!
-bob
person sunflower
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic! I love it love it love it. I just read it all in one sitting, and what a trip! My fave chappie was #13, with the Dursley\'s, lol. Sexy and funny.. Do continue!
person shadowfax21
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve never really read erotic literature until a friend recommended it to me recently....Another friend recommended this site to me the other day....I have to say that I am really enjoying this story and think that it is very well written! :-) I am looking forward to the next installment! :-)
person dragon34
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry\'s fate made sense to me. A \'hard\' Draco is a good Draco. Keep up the great work
person BlackLustz01
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\'I no longer have the desire to go against you Potter. It
person robin777
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved how dominant Harry was. I loved how Harry got Draco to support him.
person Alexia
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Verrrrrrrrry nice. Although I\'m more a femmeslash fan than I am a het fan... let alone a triple het fan lol. I really like the boy on boy action. ALthough I think, in the beginning, you could have made Harry more conflicted, jealous and angry. He never struck me as someone who could join a menage trois so easily. *shrug* But even without that, very yummy. Keep the pace where it is, not too fast and not too slow.
person Elliott
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is amazing.please write more chapters.
person Robbie Byrd
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked how you had Harry make Draco submissive.
person rubberduck
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
while i don\'t like what you have done with hermione\'s background, i do like the little twist with harry\'s background. that\'s a very cool and unique situation. giving him that kind of edge makes things a bit dangerous and thrilling. i just hope you don\'t get too extreme with it and make harry evil. i find it funny that it so closely relates to star wars and luke (and anakin\'s) struggle with the dark side of the force. hopefully harry will follow luke\'s example and stay on the side of the light.