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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person dragon34
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ron should have asked to join in. Ok maybe not. I can\'t wait to see what the detention will be about
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another riveting chapter, I
person Catpower
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so-oo sexy! I never knew about the pinching the clit thing. Maybe it only works if a wizard does it though. Have to try it and find out :)
person robin777
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I hope Harry can convince Ron to keep quiet. this storry just keeps getting better and better
person Dreamweaver
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I need that kind of cheering up as well. LMAO I like the way you showed Ron as being shocked and extremely upset about the situation, I expected nothing less. After all, Hermione and Harry have had time to come to terms with things (not to mention the extra entincements) and Ron hasn\'t. That was brilliantly written. Well done!!
person Narcissa Black
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was certainly worth waiting for. This was so incredibly hot. Poor Ron, why is it that he always seems so clueless? For a minute there I wondered if he would have the presence of mind to ask to join in.
person bob
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all feedback huh?
weeeeeell yesterday I had a doctors appointment and they told me I had chyemidia and then......JUST KIDDING!!!! :D
well this chapter was one I was waiting for...please dont make ron go in the threesome.....it\'s not a threesome when you have four....thats just too many....and not to mention he\'s a blumbering fool and wouldn\'t know his way around the female anatomy if you made him a map!....YOU SHOULD MAKE HIM A MAP!!! lol
oooook well I hope you update soon...this story is awesome!
-bob
person becca
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg. i love it! keep writing!
person Robbie Byrd
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked how you had Harry, Hermione, & Draco tell Ron about them.
person Chrissy
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That the best story I read for H/D/H. I love it I can\'t wait to read more of your fine story.