rate_review Reviews

I liked how you had Harry & Draco rescue Hermione.

I think you should slow down... make everything come at a slower pace so more detail and emotion comes out. You devote a lot of care into the description of the sex scenes but not enough at everything else. Hermione was neraly killed, you\'d expect a more detailed reaction from both Malyfoy and Harry.

Also the plot moved to fast. You zipped through everything. I am glad that you update regularily and that you do so quickly but I would rather wait two weeks for your latest chapter if it were detailed and raw in description and character development rather than have a poorly and quickly written chapter each day. Please slow down, you are doing so well...

Pleeeeeeeeeeease update soon! I adore this story and this cliffhanger is almost unbearable!

Noooooo! Not a cliffie! Thats evil! How can u just leave me hanging like that???!!!

I think Pansy is about to learn what true fear is. I don\'t know if she has ever been in the presence of an angry dark lord but I think she is about to. I loved the rescue. I loved Moody\'s reaction.

I love the basic plot and outline of your story. Call me crazy but I\'m not much in to the sex scenes\', but they\'re still good all the same. Can\'t wait for the next chap keep up the good work.

L8er.

Great chapters! I am so on edge waiting for the next episode. (Better than Star Wars!) I hope Harry doesn\'t do anything too rash. I can tell he is turning to the Dark side. I do hope they get to him befor he is in over his head.

There are so many things I like about this story. The sex is awesome first of all, but it is also so damn funny. \"she

will harry burn parkinslut\'s face like he Prof Q, i liked that. or stick some red hot pokers in her like spike did to angel, like that too.

You know the two Dark Lord thing might actually be cannon? They way you have it written, it sounds right. Believable. Now that Draco and Hermione are out of the closet, I can only imagine what the studend body will do. I hate Pansy. I don\'t know why, and a scheming Pansy is so much worst. I guess you can kinda tell that I don\'t like her from my fic, huh? Well, I eagerly anticipate more.

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