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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Kimi
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! OMG...the first part when you had the gryffies finding out was GREAT! I like how you took it slow and didn\'t have them accept it at first, and harry and draco\'s bravery was just too much! The Slytherins? That was wonderful. I\'m glad you made it so that some of the slytherins accept it and some don\'t, that gives it some diversity so not everyone is like: \"Yes Lord Harry\" and that sort of thing. Hermione\'s fantasy? That is gunna be some hot stuff and I can\'t wait!! I was hoping that sometime in the story you would make them have gentle sex I think that will be HOT HOT HOT! YAY...can\'t wait! Update soon!
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it is one of my absolute favorites. the plot is amazing and the sex is even better. I love the harry draco hermione hookup glad you didnt pick ron as one of the three seenig as draco is my favorite. Keep up the good work and update soon.
person Dreamweaver
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There were so many brilliant lines in this chapter that I might of well just quoted the whole thing. I love how you handled the boys discovering the trio in bed, especially Draco\'s protectiveness (or perhaps possessiveness) when he caught them checking out Hermione. Harry\'s sarcasm at that moment was wonderful. Looking forward to more of the jungle theme. Getting a foot massage while eating chocolate sounded pretty bloody good to me too. Awesome stuff!!!!!!!
person kat
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story
person Rain
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fucking Awesome. I love and i mean LOVE this fic. an\'t wait for an update.
person clasyact
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh now it wasn\'t that long of a chapter! But I guess we all get writers cramp after a while. Still enjoying this hot fic of yours. \"here here\" to Hermione, The gentlemen should make love to eachother. By the way... not that any of them need any more problems than they already have, but has Hermione kept up with those contraceptive spells and do Draco and Harry have any responsibility in this dept? But now I remember your Marlstrom plot idea... I\'m sure that will come into play soon enough.

Happy writing and many great ideas to you ;-)
person anjellic
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to see this scene...it looks like it\'s going to be HOT! The sensual side of Harry and Draco...yummy!!!!
person jess
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like the slitheren show
and the thing with the jungle sounds intreaging .... a jungle?
person rubberduck
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am really enjoying this story. it was brilliant when harry went after pansy for her attempted assassination. glad it didn\'t work by the way. harry is one powerful wizard. the scene in the slytherin common room was cool. as was the scene in the morning in harry\'s dorm. pretty funny. what is neville going to do with those panties, hmmm? what a perv lol. i\'m very excited to see what happens in the da meeting. i wonder who will support him and who won\'t. can\'t wait!
person bob
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmh....leopard and zebra...going.at it? hehe kinky!
well I\'d have to say that the saying \"a way to a girls heart is through her feet\" totally true! I just wish that someone else would get that clue.....my poor feet :\'(
sooo this chapter was awesome....full of the plot that we love....the slytherins are finally starting to get who\'s side will win. Your making me happy! :D
ooo tay! Now update the happy jungle scene!
-bob