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I like your story so far and I have one thing to say to the wanna be sex experts out there. If you don\'t like it dont read it, honestly people these are teenagers of course there going to call their stuff weird names, don\'t you people remember what raging hormones felt like. You don\'t care what it\'s called as long as your getting some, ya know.LOL. Besides that when you start calling certain parts of your body by their scientific name you lose your readers because they don\'t wanna read sex ED. They just want to read a hot fic.

Just so ya know I\'ve been reading the reviews and they kinda made me laugh. l8er.

I read the first chapter and found that I couldn\'t go any further. First of all, if you have not sexual experiance you may want to look up on annatomy. The semi-lemon scene was a real testament to your lack of knowledge. Second the situation was pretty ridiculous. Oh well maybe the rest is better.

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and damn you to hell if you don\'t

Your an amazing writer and I cna\'t wait for the next chapter to come out! This is such an interesting plot! I\'m glad they were caught because now that means the whole school is going to know and the schools reactions to their relationship is what is going to be really great.

<3 Appleton Grey

i love this story!

^___^ So Smutty! I love this story, it\'s full of sexy goodness, or as my friends say smexy >.< I like how you\'ve written it so far and I\'m glad Harry has some Sytherin support, so far. I also think It\'ll be good to see how people react to Hemrione\'s liniage when she claims her fortune etc. Please update soon.
Luv Naty

This chapter was the funniest thing ever! I was laughing so much!! Well done *Goes to read the rest of the chapters* ^.^ Luv Naty

Damned good story, can\'t wait to see more.

Thanks so much for taking my advice on having Harry\'s roomates find him in bed, it was so hilarious when you eplained the looks on their faces! I would have loved to be Hermione in that fantasy, it\'s so hott. I\'m glad that everyone is finally gonna find out about their secret. This was such a good chapter, I really enjoyed it. I can\'t wait to see the boys in their g-strings!(lol) You\'re such a good writer and I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Hmmmm, suggestion for the next chapter, none becauseb your doing marvolously on your own and i know that you won\'t dissapoint me! Update soon!

This is quite a story! You\'ve managed to surpass PWP and turn it into a very interesting nail-biter. Keep up the great smutty work!