rate_review Reviews

This just keeps getting better and better. I thought Hermione\'s fantasy was so hot. I really liked Harry telling the DA about himself and how he and Hermione left.

well it sounds interesting! And I really love it, it would make such a good book. If only J.K would start writing stuff like this LOL J/k *sigh* oh well. Keep up the good work!

I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY! You are an awesome riter! You make it seem so real...i mean, i almost started crying when i red about Draco sticking up for Harry.

Ure story plot is also really good, as well as the sex!

Keep it up,
Angelee

First off, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I never realized that you were the author!! Great job on this one!!! I am a big fan of the Slave dancer chapter..LOL I know..sounds funny when your name is Slave4Severus. WHERE IS YOUR OTHER STORY?????? I was waiting for an update and then find out that you pulled it. Why??? I was so looking forward to Hermione and Blaise...and of course Sev...please tell me you will not let some stuffy idiots keep you from writing!!! Kudos for standing up for yourself, oh great one!

vknickens@netzero.com

I can tell you\'re excited about the plotline of this story - it shows with everything you do. :) My goodness where to start - that chapter covered so many things. I think I\'ll invest in a hammock for a start. LOL Very nice work there. *evil grin* I\'m pleased Dean and the others kept quiet over their discovery of the trio too - there\'s a lot of loyalty and respect there for Harry and Hermione and it was good to see they intended on honouring it. Oh and poor Sev, things are going to get rather difficult for him, aren\'t they? All that trouble and worry and no one (well except maybe Dumbledore) really knows what he has to do to get through the life he is leading. Looking forward to seeing how you handle this as well as Hermione\'s family dealings too. Oh alright, I can\'t wait for everything. Bring it on!!!!

The kids around here get 6-8 weeks off, it seems like loads! i hope that was some kind of help! Love the story

I have really been enjoying this fic! You have managed the all-but-impossible with this threesome. It\'s believable and compelling. I have seen quite a few spelling and grammatical errors, which detract from the story. It\'s like stubbing my toe when I \"trip\" over them. However, it\'s not enough to keep me from checking back for updates on a daily basis! Keep up the excellent creativity!

Please, please, please, PLEASE update NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The first chapter was purposely written to convey a lack of knowledge as both Ron and Hermione had no experience up to that point.

Wow....your story is amazing. I don\'t believe it at all!! It started off with smut, smut, smut, but then the plot developed and it\'s even better in chapter 23 than it was in chapter 2!!! (And I\'ve just had a moment of deja vu...) Anyways, you\'ve done a lot of writing in a short amount of time. Actually, I\'d really love the story more with less description of sex now that we know exactly how the \"Get-down Trio\" do it. I like the direction the plot is going in. Great story!