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oh it makes me so happy when see that you have updated! I jut love how you keep draco in character hes still a jerk at times but you get to see him being vulnerable and tender as well. Cheers to you!

great new chapter, as i said before, i absolutely love scary harry!
too bad i only found out about your other story now you\'ve taken it offline :( i\'m sure it was great as well! i\'d love to read it... so if you don\'t mind, maybe you\'d email it to me one day? that would be cool!

Great chapter, I really enjoyed reading it. As for your question about the school holidays here. If I remember rightly, we get two weeks over Christmas and New Year. Easter holidays are a week, and so is the May Bank Holiday. (May 1st.) Summer holidays are for six to seven weeks. July through to September 1st. (Or whatever date the first Monday in September is.) Finally, we have two weeks in October. It has been a long time since I attended school, and My daughter has left school now, so I hope these are acuurate enough for you? Good luck with the rest of the story, I can\'t wait to see what else happens.

why did u stop there ??? keep updating

GAH!!!! CLIFFY!!! lol oh wellz, at least you know that i definately will be coming back daily to see what happens next! great plot by the way!

p.s. who would have figured that with power, people would come up to you and ask to suck you off?? lol the world is a more twisted place then i thought!

ooo next chappy\'s gonna be gooooood! :D
That Warrinton guy...or whatever his name is....is a total goon...where would you get a rumor about bodily fluids from a dark lord?.....thats a little creepy....I hope Lucius gets what he deserves....damn dirty ape!!!! heheh
UPDATE SOON!
-bob

The story is pretty well writen, but its really lacking believability. Too much wangst and OOCness really ruin it.

WOOOO!!!!! Dark Harry! I love it! hehe...I\'m a sucker for dark harry, wow, that\'s hot. Anyhoo, can\'t wait to see what he will do to lucius. I swear, for about point 2 seconds you had me convinced that draco was somehow going to sway lucius over to harry\'s side, but then....he didn\'t, and that just made it even better for me. We\'re going to find out more about the marlston\'s next chapter right? cause I\'m dying know more about them and how the grangers reacted to it! woot! should be good. Oh, btw, that warrington scene...that was creepy how he was like serious about it and everything...calling harry the dark lord, I thought it was going to be a joke at first, but he was serious! that made it very exciting, especially when harry lost control like that. phew, anyways...good job on this chapter! update soon!!

I\'d love to see your work for examples of believeable stories. Please let me know what you\'ve written and I\'ll be happy to read and review them.

I\'m pleased Ron and Harry sorted things out. :) I can\'t imagine them staying angry with eachother for long. You weren\'t kidding about bad Harry. He was rather *cough* riled up. I\'m just worried what Warrington is going to do now that he has some of Harry\'s \'essense\' going by the discussion with Draco beforehand. Oh and I don\'t think I\'d like to be Lucius right at this moment either. And I think Gryffindor is having quite the influence over Draco considering he\'s being brave and finally standing up to his father. Well done!!!!!