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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person VI
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Your great with detail and switching characters. And love how your always coming up with new situations and positions. And Harry pissed off and powerful
person Sorceress14
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was horrible what Lucius did to his own son! And then Hagrid trying to help and him not even giving a damn! He\'s so evil, I hope he get what he deserves in the end. Anyway, brilliant writing! I love how caring Draco and Hermione are even though Harry did something wrong. This story has definitely blossomed into more than Hermione losing her virginity, this is a great piece. The plot seems so well thought out and I love every twist. By the way, when will the girl/girl thing be brought back into the story? Just wondering. Update soon, please!
person refreshingly punk
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is quite possibly the best fan fiction i have ever read, i love the relationship they\'ve got going .... it seems so far off, like it could never actually happen but as the story goes on you kind of wonder is there any way it could not happen, it just flows so well. you should make hermione save draco or harry from something because their always saving her and stuff, a chicks who save guys kick ass (although guys saving chicks rocks pretty hard too) ..... ANYWAYS i love where this is going, don\'t change a thing....except UPDATE oh yeah

i love it
i adore it

you are a fabulous writter
person Charlotte
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please keep up the good work!

Thanks!
person robin777
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love Dark Harry. I loved what he did to Lucius and how Draco brought him back from the edge. I\'m glad that Draco and Hermione weren\'t upset at Harry for what happened with Warrington. I can\'t wait to find out what Draco does to him.
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay: I should have reviewed earlier, but it took me some time to make up my mind about the story, and I hate reviewing just for reviewing
person bob
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh.....*drools* That.was.freaking.FANTASTIC!!!!!!
I really dont like Malfoy Sr. He got what he deserved....and the whole X across the chest was really awesome...like he was being condemned by the fates to mark his life as scum or something.
I wonder what Draco and Hermione will do to make the other students realize that Harry\'s \'fluids\' are not for tasting.....hmmh mightily interesting.
tee hee....the next book it gonna be soooo gooooood!!! I swear, for the next couple of weeks it will be nothing but dreaming of that book.....seriously.
as always....update soon!
-bob
person franjipani Lee
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bloody brilliant
person Dreamweaver
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter, my dear. :) I love how you show Harry walking along that very thin line between good and evil. All that power must have some level of control or Harry truly would be lost. I suppose that\'s the difference between Harry and Voldemort in this story. Voldemort never had the strength to the fight it yet with Harry, there\'s still hope. (LMAO - I don\'t mean to sound so Star Wars-like). I like that Harry told Hermione and Draco what happened with Warrington too. More strength of character there and are willingness to let people help him and care for him - very well done. :)

Oh yeah, I\'m sure book 6 is going to blow everything I\'ve down out of the water, too. Oh well.
person Kimi
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!! I love how you handled the whole lucius scene, that was very good. Not too gorey, but just enough so that we got the point. But you are planning something for him in the future aren\'t you? *laughs evilly* Can\'t wait for that. There is something about lucius that just gets me all excited for the story and I can\'t wait to see what he is going to do. I am also really glad that draco and hermione weren\'t mad at harry for the whole warrington thing. Well, of course I knew they wouldn\'t be, but there is always that possibility right? Ok, well...excellent chapter! Update soon!!