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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
10 days till book 6 YAY! AS always i loved it. he plot keeps getting more and more intense.when i started reading this story the plot was kinda weak (sorry) but now its completly amazing one of the best ive read in a long time. i love seeing a more compationate draco and an extremly pissed off harry. Great job cant wait for an update
person Miya Sparrow
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful!...thats all I have to say! :-D
person anon
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there seems to be less and less sex each time, but the plot makes up for it.
person Narcissa Black
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still loving the story. In Chapter 25, I like to think that you mean traitor, not trader. Traders need love too, you know.
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like it. It\'s great, novella length even. I could go on a technical rant here, but there\'s really no point. You\'re talented, and a good Beta could fix your spelling/grammar issues. Everyone makes them, even me, and I\'m rather psycho about the whole thing. All in all, so far a great read, and I\'ll be looking forward to your next update.

~Bri
person Petalsoft
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t worry, plenty of sex is coming. It\'s just been plot heavy lately because events just had to happen for me to move this plot forward. There\'s been a lot to try to fit in lately. But there will definately be lots of sex coming up!
person Twinkle
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, two exciting chapters to catch up on. :D I like the way you\'ve written Dark Harry, you can tell you enjoy writing him like that. I aam dying to see what form of revenge Lucius takes out on Harry. And also what Draco does to Wanton Warrington. :) This fic just keeps getting better and better. I love it!
person dragon34
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really do like dark Harry, he\'s a lot more funner then the mild Harry.
person Elayne
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you update this so often! I\'ve been with you since pretty much the beginning. I\'m impressed how you have turned a PWP into a very ingrossing story with an intriging plot. Keep it coming!
person yomouda
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DON\'T STOP!!! oh honey child you are bloody amazing, please continue, but about Harry and Draco in animal G-strings, give me 5 minutes in the bathroom with Hermione to tell her off because that was humiliating, but hot at the same time