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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person yomouda
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep updating, that chapter was FUNNY! harry, hermione, and draco having sex in class, GAH! WHAT IS THIS WORLD COMING TO! but hey that was fucking sexy, so I\'m not complaining...
person Melissa
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! it has the perfest balance between sex and storyline and you sex scenes are fuckin hot!
person imari
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story was incredilble if you need any help writing it just email me and ill work something out.
person rubberduck
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i guess the old adage is true. you will become your parents. lol that\'s what everyone fears and we all try to avoid, but sometimes it just doesn\'t work out that way. lucius has rubbed off on draco just a little bit. it was a good scene though, showing how the slytherins think about a dark wizard. the warning to the first years was poignant. they don\'t coddle those kids. tell them like it is. it\'s just a little extreme for those gryffindors though. i can see harry trying to stop that.

new thought: it was so hot how harry and draco fucked hermione. those kinky pervy teens. i was kind of surprised with seamus and parvati though. seeing those wolves get it on must be quite the aphrodisiac. i don\'t think everyone would have been turned on by that. and i really don\'t think two people who you have never showed any interest in each other before would grind against each other. but, that being said, seamus is one lucky irishman hehe.
person Arabrant
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice little plot you\'ve woven into a story that started as a smut piece. Wasn\'t Harry looking for a private place that he could meet his two lovers in private? But I guess he\'s been a little distracted recently. Keep up the good work.
person robin777
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I really enjoyed Warrington getting punished. I do agree with Draco the Slytherins have been raised differently and not punishing him would have been seen as a weakness.
person Sorceress
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Getting off on wolves? That was strange to say the least but the fucking in class was extremely hot. Anway, still waiting patiently for Hermione\'s decision about the girl/girl thing. I would like it if Harry and Draco watch and touch themselves at it, that would be sexy. I\'m so glad that Warrington finally got what he deserved, the rotten bastard. Well, update soon! I won\'t stop reading this fic until it\'s over!
person Gardengirl
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, ok, I\'m with you now. I was shaking my head after the last chapter - Harry would NEVER let some other schmuck do that to him - but I see where you\'re going now. Thanks for going out on that limb! Now... the wolves... what a scream! And Hagrid would definitely NOT get what the effect on teenagers would be. Keep up the excellent story and I do appreciate the regular updates!

Cheers,
Gardengirl
person Catpower
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! Fabulous! Loved the bathroom scene and the whole dark Harry thing - it really gets across the old adage, \"power corrupts\". I also really enjoy the way that, in your version of the wizarding world, sex is so much closer to the surface of daily life - and therefore more forgiveable, or at least understandable, to everyone. If only I thought I could get away with saying to my partner something like, \"sorry but I accidentally let a colleague of yours go down on me by mistake - you don\'t mind, do you?\"
\"No, Catpower, not at all. You obviously weren\'t feeling yourself at the time.\"

It\'s lucky we\'ve got fanfics like this to help us dream.
person Lu Ling Qi
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i feel this is one of the best stories i have read ina long long time. I love the power and th story line and how oyu ae taking it. I am finding myself a fan of the hermonie hary draco stories and this one is fantastic. Please continue to write and update this as i will looking for updates in the future. Not to sound arrogant but i rarely review anything as most of it is dribble so feel good and feel special that you had someoen that does not usually reveiw reveiw your story. As always update soon!