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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person JMFELTON
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 17 LOL!!!! THAT WAS SOOOO FUNNY THIS STORY IS AMAZING, WELL BACK TO READING
person luvhp
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, well, that answered my last question about Hr/OFC! Very nice, very not. Harry sitting in the chair getting off was so FRIGGIN HOT!
Off to continue reading, just had to let you know know how much I "desire" this story!!
person luvhp
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I keep wanting to review, but there are so many more chapters I need, NEED to get to :)
This is a very, HOT, sexy, mysterious story and I ABSOLUTELY love it! It amazes me that after 30 chapters you keep coming up with new positions for those three, LOL. HOT, HOT, HOT!
Dark Harry is amazing, and I agree, I would have let Pansy drop and probably would have murdered Lucius, okay maybe not since Draco asked him not to.
So, this whole Marlston thing is pretty intriguing. LMAO when they arrived in the "circle" and poor Mr. E had to take care of himself.
Oh, hey, BTW, whatever happened to Hr/OFC?? Never mind, I still have like over 20 chapters to catch up on, LOL.
LOVING your story!
person MissingFish
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* It's over! But there's another one. *evil grin* One thing I noticed though, despite the fact that they were all having sex at least five times a week, we naver caught Hermione during her peroid.

Just imagine, Harry or Draco goes to play with her for a little pre-penitration fun and finds...a tampon?!?!

Just an idea.
person Vanessa
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
first I have to say, that my english is very very bad, so don't laugh about it, ok? *smile*
I come from germany and I'm reading your story in german, translated by minnie. But i think that i have to give you a personal review, so: here is it! :) (better: I'll try to...)
Your Story is amazing. I love it so much and I am very glad about the translation into german. Reading fanfictions in english is kind of hard for me... *lol*

The characters you write about, are my favourites. But this is just one point why I am so in love with "What a Witch Needs". The plot is really special and really good. The Lemons are hot, baby! ;) I've never read a triangle with Harry, Draco and Hermione but your Idea for this fanfiction is great!
I hope so much, that Minnie translates the new chapter quickly - tried to read it in english, but the most words I don't understand. :)
So, I hope that I wrote this comment in a aceptable english and wish you a great time and many many Ideas for your Storys!
Hugs, Vanessa
person Lily
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just realized that in chapter fourteen when harry is telling draco about him being a dark lord and he says "There can only be one Dark Lord. Only one" is similar to what is said in the Highlander movie, This is my second time reading WAWN and I love it just as much the second time around as I did the first, but when I realized that I just thought I should point it out
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you are still checking for reviews of this fic but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading it. I just finished the last chapter and plan on going to read Paradise Found. You did a magnificent job with mixing plot together with smut! <3 Keep writing!
person Hermyone
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, where do I start. I have just finished reading the entire story and was completely blown away. First of all the sex was amazing really well written and an amazing turn on, Hermione was just so sexy. As for Harry and Draco, well I don't normally go for slash at all but that was so well done, and when all three were together just incredible. Now for the story, brilliant just brilliant. One of the best works of fan-fiction I have ever read, awesome characters and an amazing storyline I just couldn't stop reading. I bow down to your genius and imagination and really really look forward to reading Paradise Found. Thank you very much for writing such an enjoyable story. :)
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I read through this epic piece of smutty fanfic goodness in a couple of evenings, I was SO enthralled with it! The plot as well as the sex and the interesting ways that you wove the threads of the story together were all riveting. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!!
person Skovtrold
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say that it