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hi ive just spend 3 nights reading your story (im a slow reader) and i thought it was brilliant, are you goin to be writing any more, if so can u let me no i would love to read more, i loved everything that happened,

This is an awesome fanfic, I can\'t wait to finish it all. Its totally hot. :)

yomouda here again, horny wolves aren\'t they? oh yeah draco reminds me of mufasa...

THIS IS GOD!!! I LOVE THIS STORY...I hope you continue it soon.

Ha warrington got wacked mafia style! I loved it that was super hot!!

That\'s some potion Snape made. LOL Pity Hagrid didn\'t think about what he was doing before the lesson started. Of course, I don\'t think the students minded all that much. Bet there was a rush for the dorms or the bathroom after that lesson finished. LMAO It was rather sad to read about what is expected in society from purebloods that do not adhere to the code and to think that they just accept that way of life. There are certainly going to be some changes made there regardless of what Draco and the others believe is \'the way things are done\'. Wonderful chapter.:)

You expressed concern about some of you grammatical mistakes and whatnot.
I have a little tip for you. Read your work backwards, each word at a time.
Sine you wrote the story your brain fills in the blanks or corrects mistakes
without you being aware of it. By reading it backwards you will be more likely
to catch misspelled or misused words and other mistakes. Hope this helps out.
I am enjoying your story so far and looking forward to the next installment.

Dark Draco,nice :) keep it up

MOTHER OF PEARL!!! That was the hottest Care of Magical Creatures Class EVER!! OMG...I cannot believe you had them do that! *gasps* I had a feeling at the beginning of the class that you might, but I never actually thought that you would!! IT WAS GREAT!! HAHA. I also like the attitudes that the three of them are taking now, not caring what other people think, and just being open. That\'s good, very good. I\'m not really sure how I felt about the whole Draco/Warrington thing. In one sense, I think it is good that Draco is doing that for Harry and I guess if Warrington understands that it is a matter of respect to Harry and now he is going to really support him that will be ok. But, I\'m not sure I like the idea of Draco doing that to people. I don\'t know. I have mixed feelings, but it was very good. Update soon!

Ooh Draco is becoming even more manipulative then ever in this chapter. It\'s nice to see some of his canon characteristics come into play. I\'m interested to see whether there is anything to the bodily fluids thing, or is that a red herring? Great chapter, as always. :)