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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sry to review again so quickly but i just finished reading what you have to date. DO NOT STOP WRITING IF JK ROWLING\'S BOOK SIX FIGHTS AGAINST YOUR IDEALS. in a way to many of us, i think, this has become the continuation of the series. A more adult/smut version to be sure, but... you should become a proffesional author. Serious. I\'ve read worse books by famous authors that make millions a year. You have the talent even if you don\'t publish. Anyways. I\'ve run out of things to say but in all likely hood after the next chapter i\'ll be reviewing again. If you need a beta, just let me know. Keep up the good work
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is definately still going in the right direction for me. I just love the whole Marlston thing, both the underground vault with the blood key and the scary \"Marlston comes for you!\" witch. It is interesting that you have found a way to give Draco a power that Harry doesn\'t have in that Draco knows the ways of dark wizards. I am fascinated to see how far Harry and Hermione go with the dark magic thing before saying, \"that\'s immoral and we can\'t do that.\" Or maybe they will turn to the dark side. There are lots of possibilities, I guess and I am looking forward to seeing what happens next. Enjoying all the shagging too - that\'s one thing I\'m sure we won\'t find in the new HP novel :)
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude. Dudette. dont know what you are. you are an amazing author. if i could i would buy the harry potter patent off of jk rowling and ask you to write book seven. of course it would never make it past the censors, but hey.I think that your idea of harry being a dark lord is one with unlimited potential that i only wish jk rowling knew about. You know what though, I think hermoine needs to get harry in her pussy and malfor up her ass. Double stuffed, plain and simple. Keep up the awesome work. I\'m only on chapter seventeen, but so far you haven\'t let me down. Ty for all your hard work
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely Fantastic!
Keep it up!
Keep it up!
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is too fucking good. keep up the good work
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant job getting to the vaults at Gringotts. I think I was riding the darn thing with them. And damn those stones must be powerful. I\'m just imagining all the rituals there must have been there. :) I didn\'t imagine Harry or Draco for that matter would let anyone else near their lady. Can\'t wait to see what happens when they get to the house. Wonderful work, once again. :)
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wAHHH!! i love this story! :D keep writing!!!
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wicked story
Keep on writing
Keep on writing
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how uncivilized... keep updating though