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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m reviewing!!!! :O) Honestly, I really liked the chapter. It was different but believable, which is important (at least to me when determining great stories lol). I can\'t wait to see the next installment!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have liked your story since chapter one. I can hardly wait to find out more about Those-Who-Dwell-Beneath. They seem really spooky. Update real soon.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I just got the Half-Blood Prince! I spent like half my Vaction reading it, much to the displearsure of my friend!...anyway I was just trying to see which story is better yours..or J.Ks! ahahahahahaha....hehehe yours is better! ahahahaha more please!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i started to read this harry/hermione/ginny story and found it moronic, but this one i\'m drawn to. maybe because being with two guys at once is some what of a secret fantasy of mine. but don\'t tell anyone! lol.
anyway, this story is hott. HOTT and it\'s getting interestig with the plot developement. I was wondering when you were going to through in that sex position that was in the sexual rituals stone circle thing. yeah, hope that made sense...
i take it that the Marlston women tend to have two male lovers?
good chap, update soon, please. I want to find out what\'s going to happen in the Marlston Manor ;)
anyway, this story is hott. HOTT and it\'s getting interestig with the plot developement. I was wondering when you were going to through in that sex position that was in the sexual rituals stone circle thing. yeah, hope that made sense...
i take it that the Marlston women tend to have two male lovers?
good chap, update soon, please. I want to find out what\'s going to happen in the Marlston Manor ;)
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am soooo sorry I haven\'t reviewed before. These stories are my guilty, sneaky pleasure at work so i don\'t usually have time. But your story made me stop and review. I love it, it\'s so hot! It has an excellent story line, but you don\'t forget to frequently add the oh so delicious smut. I\'m greatly looking forward to the Marleston chapters ahead. Please update soon!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I loved how clearly you depicted Belinda & Meri. The aura of mystery that you\'ve created is very gripping! I can\'t wait to read more! Please update soon! Priss
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good plot movement. I\'m glad they were up to inspection standards. It\'s good that they are all together; I think they will need eachother in the end. Thanks for the update! I\'m looking forward to reading about the Manor!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally LOVE this story!! I check it like twice a day to see if you have updated!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens in Marlston Manor! I hope it\'s nothing too harsh!
Would it be possible for you to email me when you update? My email is jessiduke05@yahoo.com. If you can\'t, that\'s fine! I will still check religiously!
~deshijessi
Would it be possible for you to email me when you update? My email is jessiduke05@yahoo.com. If you can\'t, that\'s fine! I will still check religiously!
~deshijessi
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Excellent chapter indeed!! Those \"Things-That-Dwell-Below\" or something like that was a VERY good touch, I wasn\'t really expecting that. And I also really liked when Harry started to take charge of the situation, even though it didn\'t get him anywhere. Hehe...I would like more of that please! More of Harry being dominant and kind of dark. I don\'t know why but for some reason I am drawn to him when he is dark. I like it. I am very excited to see what is in store for the 3 for the remainder of the Marlston Chapters, I\'m sure they will all be fabulous! :) Update soon!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter. I had begun to wonder where the focus of the story was going to go. For a few chapters it was very Harrycentric, it\'s good to see it going back to Hermione - will Draco have a turn as well? This is really good! I can\'t wait for the next updates.