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This is the best Harry Potter story on this web site. At least, that I have read. It has a great plot, character depth not known in the real books, and hot sex scenes. Please make the wait for the next chapter short?

OMG you are such a good writer! The way you write is like.. WOW!!
I really love the story and I think many of your ideas would be fun to have in \"the real thing\" As in Draco turning out to be not-evil..

But I absolutely LOVE dark harry.. makes me think about Jarrod in old magic and dark link all together,,

Oh my GOD!!! i am in love with your story! totally, and not unwillingly. please, i BEG YOU, update soon!! this story is fantastic, ESPECIALLY the sex :)
anyways, i hope that you can sort of like, maybe e-mail me when you update?? thankies very muchie if you do!!

It was good...

oh Im so excited about the chapters to come. im a little warry of those things that live below. they seem kind of michevious

an interesting chapter. those who dwell below (or something like that. sorry i\'m not that good at remembering things) seem a creepy and mysterious sort. the mist, while not necessarily a new creative tool, works well. it keeps people guessing and the real faces of what it hides remain hidden (did that make sense?) i\'m curious as to what these creatures are really. they seem nice enough to hermione and her friends. that\'s a good sign, even though hermione didn\'t seem to like the mist inside her though. i can only imagine what hermione and her boy\'s experiences will be like while at the manor. i guess i can expect some smut though hehe.

I usually dont read ficts with hermione being the main character because people make her into someone that is nosey and bossey. I love your fic if you wouldn\'t have added draco i wouldn\'t even read it. This is one of the hottest stories i have ever read and trust me i have read a lot of them. Keep up the great work and i am so happy i found this story today it took some time to read it but it was worth ever min and i will be looking for updates. Mechee

You know what, Petalsoft? You should write to Miss Rowling and ask her to take over your story line. Even when leaving out the sex parts (which would be a pity *lol*)it

Hello! I love this story =P and I am please askuing not to change the story to fit the New book, because i am still in the process of reading it.. and I really dont want to spoil it! i like the story as it is.. so keep up the good work!
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i loved it. please update soon.