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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person ehu
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the only thoughts i have on this story is PLEASE CONTINUE! i can\'t wait to see what happens next! this story always makes me a very very happy girl *grins*
person Twinkle
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woa, that was steamy. :D Great chapter, I love the turn to the darker side. I can\'t wait to read more of this. You have done brilliantly so far. Great as always, well done.
person kitten
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh ohh PLEASE UPDATE SOON i\'m sooo ready for some kink it\'s this a dark harry/draco/hermione but not evil fic or an evil h/d/h I DO LOVE EVIL FICS and when\'s hermione going to tap into her darker side like harry she still too goodey goodey you\'d think all that sex would relax her a bit more and bring out her naughty side i mean come on she doing two very hot guys who know how to please!
person Alleycat
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I really love your story! Listen I don\'t usually read Harry Potter Fanfic for the simple reason of usually not being good enough, to match J.K.Rowling. But yours....omg! Its got an awsome plot, Lots of plot twists mixed in, its funny as hell most of the time, and to top it all off, the lemons are fucking amazing!!!

One of the things I noticed was this fic really reminds me of an Inuyasha fanfic I read. Inuyasha is a show with demons btw. Anyway It kinda seems as if this were a three way mateing. Very nice job!

Update soon!

^_~
person AppleLady
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Petalsoft!

I just started reading this story and so far so good! Keep up the good work!

AppleLady
person Sorceress14
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry to be a critic but I\'ve been sticking with this fic for a while now because the first 10 or so chapters were REALLY REALLY good and I couldn\'t get enough. I kept reviewing even though I felt you were going a little downhill from where you started because I was hoping that it would get better. By no means is this a bad fic, I actually really like it but it\'s just not showing some of the originality or sexiness it did in the beginning, the plot\'s sort of taken over leaving no more room for the stuff that made this story what it is. There are only so many ways Draco, Hermione, and Harry can have sex and it seems almost like reading the exact same thing each time and it doesn\'t excite me anymore. I LOOOOVE your plot, it\'s great and original, but please try to find time to get back your originality when it comes to the more sensual details of the story. Sorry, I love you I really do, don\'t be mad at me! *gives puppy dog eyes* PLEASE!
person Boo
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME JUST POSTIVELY AWSOME!!
person NeNe Harumi
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and work but..come oooooon!
Update some more! x.x;
It\'s drivin me NUTS waiting for your updates..I feel like you used to add more chappies before but maybe thats just cuz I was behind from just starting the story lol
Anyhow..UPDATE MORE!
My only complaint T.T
person Nymphe
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is wild but good and I usually do not read anything with slash. The part about the peaches was brilliant, stroke of genius. Draco is still a bad boy with a weakness for power, Harry has interesting anger issues and Hermione is still the logical, unifying force between two boys. Please keep going!
person nufsinna
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your story is so much fun. I had read it before when it was just through the first Room of Requirement scene. I guess that was back in April. I was looking for it again last night, remembering how hot it was and wanting to spend some private time reading with my vibrator. And here I find you have pulled this neat little plot out of your lovely PWP. (And when I say \'neat little plot\' I of course mean \'complex, thoughtful, and highly entertaining plot\'.) And omg it is still so flipping hot! I love darklord!Harry...or I should say I bow down and worship at the feet of darklord!Harry. I\'m happy to see Hermione come into some power of her own. She will need it with those two delicious men in her bed. And then you have my beautiful Draco submitting and dominating with equal passion and helping Harry embrace his inner darkness. You have kept me up all night and I think I love you.