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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um..can\'t say I really approve of this latest chapter..the \'dark energy\' isn\'t really fitting into how you\'ve built Harry and Draco\'s characters prior to this chapter.
I\'d expect the sick mindedness from Draco, but even this seems a little too dark for him..especially from how loving you have built his character before this...anyhow...you\'re the writer and you\'ve proven time and again that there is method to your madness so..I\'m just gonna suck it up and leave it to ya! Can\'t wait for the next chappie! ^^
I\'d expect the sick mindedness from Draco, but even this seems a little too dark for him..especially from how loving you have built his character before this...anyhow...you\'re the writer and you\'ve proven time and again that there is method to your madness so..I\'m just gonna suck it up and leave it to ya! Can\'t wait for the next chappie! ^^
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is getting interesting. Is it the House that\'s overtaking them or the beings that dwell beneath, I wonder. There\'s obviously a lot of old magic in the place. I find it interesting that Harry was the one to notice there was something wrong with the library and not Hermione since she is their heiress. Can\'t wait to find out more about that one. And Draco seems quite willing to get into all sorts of mischief too LOL I wonder who he was practising on to get that lipstick on Hermione. Looking forward to more, as always. :)
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! update soon! ^_^
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, you litterally left me on the edge of my seat. I can\'t even imagine what you have in store for them. And I was delighted to hear that Draco and Harry would get to have their fantasy now, I\'ve been waiting for that. Marlston just makes me so excited! Everything about it is great! Update sooooon! :)
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Chpater 32 is too short, damn you!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have a great imagination! Im looking forward to read about that tatooist..
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite an interesting \"turn to the Dark Side\". I one plays at something long enough it becomes real. Good plot develpment, sexy as it is! Thank you for continuing to post to this intriguing story!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for the next chapter!! This fic is really well done...I hope that at some point Hermione gets tied up... Bondage ROCKS!!!!!!!!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been meaning to review for awhile and I am now finally getting to it. You have a fabulous naughtly little fic here, very entertaining indeed. I like that you have all this backstory going on, I especially LOVE the whole Marlston thing. The boys are turning into evil little freaks hahaha, I love it, I can\'t wait to see what these two do in the next chapter. Oh and I have to say even though it was wayyyy back that I absoultely LOVED when they were all intoxicated by the potion and in heat and went to the Dursleys that was so hilarious!! ANyhow arent they supposed to be writing to Dumbledore everyday? Looks like they are a bit preoccupied hehe. And I wonder if those snakes said anything to Harry even though they didnt hear him say anything to them hmmm. Will they ever get there crap together and find this \"weapon\" maybe the weapon for Harry is simply being there and bringing out the Dark Lord within him hmmm something to ponder on till I find out I guess. Keep up the great writing!!!!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just so you can understand how much i enjoyed this fic i should start by saying that i HATE reading long fics!
I started yours not realising how many chapters it had until i pressed \'next chapter\' and realised that there are 30... and more coming! lol
I made a decision to carry on reading and stop when i got bored or felt the sex scenes weren\'t as good as they should be (hehe) ;-)
After six hours and at roughly 4am i realised that not only had i enjoyed the fic but it was one of the best i\'d ever read. Yes, there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes (which usually makes me close the window straight away on a fic) but the use of language and description kept me reading.
My only critisism at the moment is that it\'s all a little too \'rosy\' for the trio. In reality we all know three\'s a crowd - maybe you could inject some conflict there? I dunno, i\'m sure you know where you\'re going with the fic and you\'ve done well enough without my help so far lol so i should really keep my mouth shut! haha just an idea though.
Keep up the great work and i can\'t wait to read more!
Sarah xox
I started yours not realising how many chapters it had until i pressed \'next chapter\' and realised that there are 30... and more coming! lol
I made a decision to carry on reading and stop when i got bored or felt the sex scenes weren\'t as good as they should be (hehe) ;-)
After six hours and at roughly 4am i realised that not only had i enjoyed the fic but it was one of the best i\'d ever read. Yes, there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes (which usually makes me close the window straight away on a fic) but the use of language and description kept me reading.
My only critisism at the moment is that it\'s all a little too \'rosy\' for the trio. In reality we all know three\'s a crowd - maybe you could inject some conflict there? I dunno, i\'m sure you know where you\'re going with the fic and you\'ve done well enough without my help so far lol so i should really keep my mouth shut! haha just an idea though.
Keep up the great work and i can\'t wait to read more!
Sarah xox