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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person bob
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DEAR GOD!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!
I give that tid bit two thumbs up!!!!!
Man, If I was a man, and if I was paulo at that moment....I\'d freaking go nuts! But having a snake going up my ass would be very kinky indeed ;)

I can\'t wait for the next update....especially if it gets more kinky than that!
-bob
person kitten
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was kinky a snake up hiss ass and kinda hot too but then i\'m just a naughty naughty girl who love her slash update soon what are they going to to sev?
person Know-it-all
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was sooo dark, but very intense! And hot! Keep writing!
person all nighter
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! that was hot! I love your creative story, please keep the good stuff coming!
person Draco\'s Princess
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loooooooooove your story. I think I like it as much as the real books. Your writing style is excellent and I love the whole thing with Harry being another Dark Lord and Hermione as Lady Marlston. I go to several different sites for HP erotica, and your story is my favorite above all others - from any site - ever (and I\'ve read A LOT. LOL). Keep \'em comming. I\'m anxious to see where your story goes.
person Know-it-all
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a cliff-hanger! You\'re killing me! This fic is so hot, it\'s unbelievable. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I was thinking that there needs to be more fic parrings like this. What\'s better than DMxHG or HPXHG, why all three! Rock on.
person Sorceress14
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! That was brilliant! I cdan\'t wait to see Hermione get fucked when she least suspects it and I also can\'t wait for the many more secrets of Marlston. This story is definately regaining it\'s previous originality and utter sexiness by the second! Update soon!
person casey
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha omg i love this chapter!! the whole peach thing was genius i was literally laughing out loud. haha
person slythrinbitch
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was hot hope you post the other chapter soon i want to see what happens great writing
person michelle
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my gosh ur a god writing these stories