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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Lestette
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I think I\'m in love with you. This story, so far, is not only, brilliant, erotic, teasing and fulfilling all the same damn time, but you also manage to keep the characters in character! Bloody Brilliant if you ask me. You are an inspiration and a very modle of a modern major smut bag ;) I love you ^_^ lol.
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uhh ohh I smell trouble comming! FUN
person Kimi
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...wonderful, as usual. That was probably one of the best chapters EVER! HA! OMG...I can\'t even describe to you how hot I think it is that Draco gets turned on from watching Harry use his powers...ugh! I love it! More of that please! Pretty please? :) And I also REALLY love how jealous and protective Draco and Harry can be over Hermione, it just always makes me think how much I would really LOVE to be her, sigh, yes I would very much like to be her, but wouldn\'t we all, haha. The Paulo thing was very well writen. And I really can\'t wait to see how they use those tattoos in the future. Hehe...should be good. Very good...very hot, well done!
person Dreamweaver
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bows low to one of her favourite queens of naughtiness. ;) Actually, the tatooist sounded quite the dish as well. And good for Hermione - she may have her men, but she can still appreciate the scenery. LMAO. Love it!!
person anjellic
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally hot!!!! The whole situation was so erotic. I loved your idea with the snake...that\'s something you don\'t see coming but totally fits! Good chapter
person Marianne
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are truly talented! I was a bit muffled by the snake though.. that was weird,,, in a good way
person litekreem
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story more and more with each update.I cant wait for pervy ass Snape to get there imagine the fun they could have with him for watching them while they were in detention.
person robin777
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was hot. This is my favorite chapter so far. I love Dark Harry and I love that he gets jealous so easily. Dom!Draco is always hot.
person dragon34
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Paulo, but at least he got to have a snake. I love to read about dark Harry, and antagonistic Draco, I also love it when Draco is dominating. Can\'t wait to read more.
person yomouda
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
weird.... update goddamnit