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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Anon
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was an \"ok\" chapter... I enjoyed reading it and all and thought it to be really good but it was much too short....

Keep up the good work and update again (with a longer chapter perhaps?) soon
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Good keep it up
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, im a huge fan of this fanfic, and blaise\'s diary, too. im so excited for the next chapters!!!
person Sara
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story but now i think you\'re taking it too far. i mean really. having a human \'pet\'? so hermione finds it easier to get so worked up about an elf\'s right but not so much mind a pet in the form of a girl to play with. i know that you say that the house is dark and all but this is hardly believable and it seems a bit too much to get someone else in the triangle don\'t you think? it takes away from the story and makes harry/draco/hermione\'s relationship a lot less special if anyone can just join in.
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooo, Oh my God! You can\'t stop here! That\'s evil! Hahaha. I can\'t wait \'till there\'s another chapter up, erm, I definatly have to find out what\'s for... lunch. ; ) Keep it up, I absolutly LOVE reading this!

~Manda~
person Abragini
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter. With Lucius and all. I wonder what will happen when he shows up at the mansion. I just cannot believe the \'pet\'. I don\'t think Harry will be very happy. Lol
person Lyndie578
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! \"Kitty\"! LOL. Brilliant, fun turn. I love this. our trio plus a new trio? Oh, my, you are adventurous! Thanks for the post!
person dragon34
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting kinkier and kinkier, I love it
person Emm
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot, love the story
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont know what I love more the fact that the plot is great and the sex ix awsome or that you update so quickley.
Im really excited about the marlston chapters, these have been by far my favorite chapters. they are the most creative as well. I cant wait to read the next chapter, so keep up the good work.